Re: The Everthere Part 3/? hbomb90May 17 2011, 22:44:07 UTC
Sherlock looks down at his hands and starts fiddling with his shirt cuffs, “Yes, well I realise that in a thirty two year old man it’s hardly normal to be a virgin but I would have thought a doctor could appreciate
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Re: The Everthere Part 5/? hbomb90May 17 2011, 22:47:27 UTC
Two weeks later John returns home from an absolutely wretched shift to hear low voices murmuring in the flat .He thinks about walking straight back out again but realises he doesn’t exactly have anywhere to go
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Re: The Everthere Part 5/? hbomb90May 17 2011, 23:00:18 UTC
I am loving this!
Poor John. Usually I would be hoping for him and Sherlock to get together, but Sherlock obviously likes Daniel and you can't just stop liking somebody because you find out somebody else likes you.
I'm torn! I want John to be happy and get his man, but part of me quite likes the idea of Sherlock being all nervous about somebody else. Daniel seems very nice.
I'm looking forward to seeing where you go with this :)
Re: The Everthere Part 5/? hbomb90May 18 2011, 00:09:30 UTC
Oh, thank you, very quick response! Well... don't judge Daniel too soon. We have a fairly innocent Sherlock flattered by the first person who hasn't hid his interest in him... Essentially,though,I'm John in this story. I want to give him the happy ending I didn't get.
Re: The Everthere Part 5/? hbomb90May 18 2011, 00:39:48 UTC
Oh my god this is so good that I want it to go on forever but I also can't handle Sad!John. This is painful to read! God fix it! Fix it NOW!!!!!!! Arrrrrgh!!!! Sherlock/John FOREVER!!!!!!!!!
Whew! Anyway this is great so far. Funny and angsty.
Re: The Everthere Part 5/? hbomb90May 18 2011, 00:44:37 UTC
Noooo!! Don't fall for the pretty boy, Sherlock.
More soon, please?! (My palms are clammy, my pulse is quickened, and I'm feeling slightly nauseated. Either I'm having a heart attack, or you've got me seriously invested in this fic...)
The Everthere Part 6/? hbomb90May 18 2011, 01:51:09 UTC
No, John thinks, no I don’t. I hate him. I hate him because you look at him like a love struck teenager. I hate him because he’s perfect, I hate him because he gets to have you, all of you, be your first. I hate him because he hasn’t got an alcoholic sister and a dead alcoholic father and a periodic limp. I hate him because he’s clever and witty and can make you laugh. I hate him because he reminds me that I am just a plain, normal man with an ugly bullet wound in my shoulder who could never have you, even when he wasn’t on the scene
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The Everthere Part 6b/? hbomb90May 18 2011, 01:52:00 UTC
When John (three cups of tea, but no biscuits, he couldn’t face them, later) decides to head back up the stairs to his own flat, he somehow manages to time it so that Daniel is coming down. John waits at the bottom until Daniel reaches the coat rack in front of the front door. He smiles at John
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Poor John. Usually I would be hoping for him and Sherlock to get together, but Sherlock obviously likes Daniel and you can't just stop liking somebody because you find out somebody else likes you.
I'm torn! I want John to be happy and get his man, but part of me quite likes the idea of Sherlock being all nervous about somebody else. Daniel seems very nice.
I'm looking forward to seeing where you go with this :)
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I'm a huge Sherlock/John shipper so of course I will love the happy ending for John. It's just a shame you didn't get the happy ending too :(
Can't wait to read more.
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That doesn’t mean you don’t have a body that’s built for sex, a mouth that’s invitation to sin...
Oh yes, poor John. I hope you eventually get your man for all your troubles. lol
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Whew! Anyway this is great so far. Funny and angsty.
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More soon, please?! (My palms are clammy, my pulse is quickened, and I'm feeling slightly nauseated. Either I'm having a heart attack, or you've got me seriously invested in this fic...)
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CARRY ON.
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