The Theory of Narrative Causality (5b/5)
anonymous
May 31 2011, 14:09:34 UTC
"… 'Really, my dear,' he said, smiling breathlessly down at me. He rested lightly upon my chest, most of his weight braced upon his thighs, and with each shift of his hips his buttocks grazed my cock, and I sighed. I cradled them, felt the give and stretch of his skin under my palms, the thin, long bones, his toned stomach and the damning small of his back. His arm shook slightly as his hand drove inside him, one long finger at a time, where I could not see.
'Holmes,' I said, and I am afraid my voice broke. Slightly. Just a little. His eyes flicked, one unsteady fluttering of eyelashes; I saw his chest hitch, saw his elbow twist and reach, his lips fall open
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My GOD you are brilliant. So, your fic of characters (fictional) writing fanfiction of fictional characters includes a fic written ostensibly about said fictional characters but was more of an in-joke disguise of what the characters were really up to...and...there goes my brain.
'Holmes,' I said, and I am afraid my voice broke. Slightly. Just a little. His eyes flicked, one unsteady fluttering of eyelashes; I saw his chest hitch, saw his elbow twist and reach, his lips fall open ( ... )
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(No, I'm not Molly, I just can't help it)
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/LOVE
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