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"I'm under your spell, like a man in a trance" anonymous May 29 2011, 10:55:04 UTC
(dub/non-con)

The nicotine patches help but they're not quite cutting it, so Lestrade decides to try hypnosis...

Yeah, I went there.

Hypno-therapy gets interfered with by Moriarty and now he can make Lestrade do anything - and what's more, like it. (Useful for interefering with police work sure, but you know what I'm really after here, don't you?)

Bonus points for:
- giving him a trigger that turns him from D.I. Oblivious to Jim's slut right in front of Sherlock and John.
- having Moriarty program him to get close to Mycroft (whether he originally wanted to or not and how that ends, up to author)

tl;dr Moriarty uses hypnosis to make Lestrade his spy/slave (and quit smoking)

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Re: FILL: No Smoke Without Fire anonymous June 22 2011, 16:33:37 UTC
*flaily muppet hands of joy*

OMGOMGOMGOMGOMG!!!

OP here - and you can take your own sweet time if it's all going to be this good!

I do love that Jim is going for the personal touch! (And I'm hoping for lots of personal touching!)

I LOVE non-conny/dub-conny why-am-I-doing-this-and-why-am-I-enjoying-it brainwashing fic so epic levels of detail will be adored.

*sets up tent in a good pitch before it gets Glastonbury-busy*

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FILL: No Smoke Without Fire Part 2a/? anonymous June 24 2011, 10:07:27 UTC
Thank you all for your lovely comments! :)_______________________________ ( ... )

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FILL: No Smoke Without Fire Part 2b/? anonymous June 24 2011, 10:08:18 UTC
“Wouldn’t give it up for the world,” Lestrade said earnestly. “I mean sure, it’s not exactly the most peaceful life. And I work with some proper pillocks.” He laughed, and Jim smiled too, knowing exactly who he meant. “But I like helping people. It’s simple as that. I don’t do much, but I like knowing I’m doing my bit. Serving the community and all that ( ... )

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Re: FILL: No Smoke Without Fire Part 2b/? anonymous June 24 2011, 11:35:16 UTC
This has all the potential to become the creepiest creepy thing ever born from creepy thoughts! You're doing a splendid job, anon loves you! :)

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Re: FILL: No Smoke Without Fire Part 2b/? anonymous June 24 2011, 16:02:40 UTC
Oh god, that thing about decision-making, he's so fucked.

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Re: FILL: No Smoke Without Fire Part 2b/? morganstuart June 24 2011, 16:08:33 UTC
I was just thinking the same thing!

Augh, this is nail-biting, edge-of-my-seat good.

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Re: FILL: No Smoke Without Fire Part 2b/? anonymous June 25 2011, 15:53:54 UTC
Author anon here.

*evil smiley*

I think there's a part of Lestrade, or indeed anyone with as much responsibility in their job as him, that would quite like to just come home from a day at work and be told what they're having for tea and what they're watching on telly and what time they ought to go to bed because they've got to be up eary for work tomorrow. It's hardly at the stage where he's going to take orders from any old person at the drop of a hat, but you can bet Moriarty was mentally laughing his most evil laugh when he found that chink in Lestrade's armour.

On the other hand, it does seem a bit of an odd description of a capable, responsible DI, so I hope it didn't sit too oddly. More on the way soon! :)

"Asterfa bathed", says Mycroft. Good for Asterfa, I say.

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Re: FILL: No Smoke Without Fire Part 2b/? anonymous June 25 2011, 18:16:37 UTC
"He is so fucked" anon here.

It sits perfectly with me, and not odd at all. Quite realistic. :)

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FILL: No Smoke Without Fire Part 3/? anonymous June 27 2011, 15:58:56 UTC
"He-is-so-fucked" anon. Possibly my favourite anon identification ever. :D Again, thanks all for comments ( ... )

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Re: FILL: No Smoke Without Fire Part 3/? anonymous June 27 2011, 16:40:00 UTC
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He looked so helpless and delicate and utterly exquisite.

They're not even touching and I'm so turned on right now... Holy Hell! The whole flow of this part was hypnotic in itself!

Oh, Jim - much as I admire your restraint - please please lose it soon!

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Re: FILL: No Smoke Without Fire Part 3/? anonymous June 27 2011, 18:50:02 UTC
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Sorry to say this, OP, but Moriarty's a patient man... :P I'm so glad you're enjoying this so far, thank you!

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Re: FILL: No Smoke Without Fire Part 3/? morganstuart June 27 2011, 18:57:40 UTC
Oh man, the thought of Jim staring at Lestrade when he's so defenceless and vulnerable... it makes my skin crawl. This is so delightfully warped and creepy and effective.

You are brilliant, Anon! Can't wait for more!

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Re: FILL: No Smoke Without Fire Part 3/? anonymous June 29 2011, 02:54:08 UTC
OH SO GOOD and creepy and hot!

YOur Greg is marvelous, that poor bastard I can't wait for Moriarty's plans but at least Jim can appreciate beauty ;)

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FILL: No Smoke Without Fire Part 4a/? anonymous July 1 2011, 12:45:04 UTC
Mycroft says "plenteri problems". I think he can see where this fic is going for poor Greg... :D_________ ( ... )

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FILL: No Smoke Without Fire Part 4b/? anonymous July 1 2011, 12:48:22 UTC
“How long do you think you were under for ( ... )

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