I bow to the ease and finesse with which you inserted the 14 quotes into the fic. Very well done!
The sexual undercurrent was... disturbing. LOL But very enjoyable to read.
I love that you chose that particular scene with which to start the fic - one of my very favourite ones of the show, even more so because, as you probably know, Wayne pushed Ben down so hard on to the table in the heat of filming the scene that he really split his lip open and made him bleed!
The hysterical laugh is so John.
And John in a wedding dress? Still damn sexy! :D
And why is Braca always destined to watch and never take part?! Poor Braca. ;-)
Thank you :) I coudn't just pick five quotes, they were all so perfect.
It's one of my favourite scenes too (from probably my favourite multi-parter...which is a hard call.)
I was tempted to have John give Braca a big sloppy kiss at the end, but I figure John has more respect for other people's personal boundaries than that :)
Thanks! I'm not sure I have a comfort zone exactly (though I don't generally do mm slash, which I think this probably counts as.) I've wanted to do something with that scene for a while, but could never quite figure the execution. When I saw all those quotes I just went, "Yes!"
And yes, Braca's thing is definitely that he likes to watch.
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The sexual undercurrent was... disturbing. LOL But very enjoyable to read.
I love that you chose that particular scene with which to start the fic - one of my very favourite ones of the show, even more so because, as you probably know, Wayne pushed Ben down so hard on to the table in the heat of filming the scene that he really split his lip open and made him bleed!
The hysterical laugh is so John.
And John in a wedding dress? Still damn sexy! :D
And why is Braca always destined to watch and never take part?! Poor Braca. ;-)
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It's one of my favourite scenes too (from probably my favourite multi-parter...which is a hard call.)
I was tempted to have John give Braca a big sloppy kiss at the end, but I figure John has more respect for other people's personal boundaries than that :)
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Laura, maybe that is Braca's thing: maybe he likes to watch?
And the music? Tainted Love? Oh yes! Thank you for a laugh to end the fic.
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And yes, Braca's thing is definitely that he likes to watch.
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