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Merlin: Harem (Part 2)

Nov 02, 2010 21:43

Title: Harem (Part 2)
Author: shesashewolf
Fandom: Merlin
Characters: Merlin/Arthur
Rating: NC-17 (overall)
Warning(s): Dub-con/non-con, mentions of Arthur/OC
Disclaimer: Characters are property of BBC and no profit is being made.
Notes: This was inspired by lolryne and her drawing http://lolryne.livejournal.com/20519. ( Read more... )

merlin, harem arc, merlin fic

Comments 17

chocolate_scone November 3 2010, 03:09:20 UTC

Ooh i love it. i'm all sorts of intrigued, can't wait for more!!

It wasn't until i finished reading that i saw that it was the second part... can you like put a link to the first part somewhere in the post, for new readers?

shesashewolf November 3 2010, 03:31:56 UTC

Thanks for the suggestion (I'm pretty new to posting on LJ and sometimes stuff like that slips my mind)! I added the link up top. :)

orion_nightbane November 3 2010, 06:27:42 UTC

MmMMmMm YUM! Can't wait for the next part! and who was at the door? :O That i'd really like to know. :)

shesashewolf November 3 2010, 20:11:12 UTC

We'll find out who was out there... eventually. hehe Thanks for commenting. :)

lolryne November 3 2010, 10:08:44 UTC

Yeah part 2! I'm happy you're going on with this! :D

shesashewolf November 3 2010, 20:08:41 UTC

Yup, the story continues! I really wanted to have this part up sooner but the last few days have been so crazy that it made writing hard.

winterstorrm November 3 2010, 10:20:49 UTC

That was hot.
I look forward to more.

shesashewolf November 3 2010, 20:10:21 UTC

Thanks for commenting. :)
Hopefully, the next update will be up before next week.

brunettepet November 3 2010, 14:50:58 UTC

I really like Merlin being able to use his magic shifts the power back to him. This "relationship" is suddenly on a much more even footing and Arthur's interest appears genuine rather than a power play. It's very sexy.

shesashewolf November 3 2010, 20:06:47 UTC

Yeah, I don't see Arthur as vicious or overly controlling and it was hard when I first tried to write his as such. I see their relationship as more of a give an take and I couldn't justify that if Arthur had control over such a major part of Merlin. Also, Arthur has his own meanings for what he is doing but he is honestly interested in Merlin, in multiple ways. (Also, thank you so much for pointing those errors out to me. It's a bit embarrassing - especially waste and waist... still can't believe I wrote that AND posted it.)