Comments | shescomplicated: The Way Back: A Michael and Jan Fic

shescomplicated

The Way Back: A Michael and Jan Fic

Dec 15, 2009 18:55

Here's what was weird (not that he cared, but seriously): She hadn't so much as called him for months now. Not even a hang up, and he knew because he checked the caller ID log every time he came in the door. It's not like he even wanted her to, but she hadn't and yeah, it was starting to bug him. Thanksgiving came and went. Christmas-- ( Read more... )

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supertvjunkie December 16 2009, 13:35:08 UTC

Awww! That's a really great fic.
I miss them so much :(
We need to get some greens and make an MJspinoff. Who's with me?

shescomplicated December 16 2009, 18:55:09 UTC

Thanks so much! Yeah, I miss 'em too. The Office just isn't the same for me these days. And yeah, I'm up for anything MJ, so spinoff, whatever it takes!

michaeljanlover December 20 2009, 07:29:00 UTC

I'M IN! I'M IN!!!!!!!!!!!! :)

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shescomplicated December 18 2009, 01:10:13 UTC

Thank you!!!

I'm worried we won't see Jan again. I just saw Melora updated her site greeting with everything she's been doing this year, and nary a word about The Office. : (

michaeljanlover December 20 2009, 07:27:35 UTC

I literally GASPED when I saw this! I can't believe that you've had it up the last few days and I never even read it. I mean, I know I'm hardly on, but I DO check in from time to time...ANYways....about your LOVELY fic:

Wow. Just wow! I really liked this a lot! And how awesome would it be if they actually brought her back this way? I wonder if that would ever really happen!!! Anyways-I have to say that your writing style is awesome. It actually reminds me a lot of how *I* write. Maybe you've took down some notes from MY fics. lol. jk. but yeah, awesome, awesome, awesome!!!

Best.Quote.Ever... "Don't make me say it again. You know how the name burns my tongue like acid."

Again-awesome job. keep up the good work. continue if you will. and I hope to see more fics from you! :)

shescomplicated December 20 2009, 15:29:28 UTC

Thanks!! And I had to LOL about my writing style. My college English professors did not have a lot of love for it back in the day, but I'm glad you appreciate it!

michaeljanlover December 20 2009, 20:21:14 UTC

Yeah, lol. My English instructor actually liked my writing style a lot. I mean, my style of writing is a little different when I write papers versus fiction. Not a whole lot different, but different enough to make it "English worthy" you know?

michaelnjan4eva December 23 2009, 02:46:49 UTC

Hey, hey, hey!! This was adorable! Definitely brings back memories of a better time....or what should be....or what the writers should take note of. All that rolled up in one! Good job on your first fic!!! Like Sara said, its hard to actually find something on here anymore considereing the lack of Jan, but I'm glad she messaged me about this! It did not disappoint :)

shescomplicated December 27 2009, 21:10:12 UTC

Just saw this and... thanks!!! : )

boredatwork1 January 4 2010, 17:02:02 UTC

So sorry I am soooo late in reading and responding to your fic! It was so busy before vacation and during vacation I of course let everything get away from me.

Anyway, I just love this fic and I'm so happy you wrote it. The characters and situation feel true, and I love the writing style as well! "Her. Him." It's all very poetic but also very dramatic and in the moment. I felt like I was there. I also liked how the perspectives switched back and forth.

I hope you write some more!