free verse (2)

[shewalksbut0see]

soft things beg for
just a touch,
but i cannot be
free for all
save one.
(or so i thought)
this before
i gave it
away.
a wilted rose,
a preemie born,
petals dead
flower gone
the child does not
lift its head.

Comments

[ginni_tamez]

O_O

I am quite blown away.

I can't even tell you how beautiful this is. It evokes sensation, emotion, that "I can't quite articulate it with words, but my heart understands" feeling.

I love this, and I love you.

[shewalksbut0see]

thanks.

it's about this last year, "and all that that implies".

i love you too!

and i am going to look for your poem's explanation too : ]