i don't think you knew you were in this songpearls_asideJanuary 30 2006, 17:26:19 UTC
you are already writing with the rhythm and music it took me 5 years to find.
i especially like "send me your prayers/so i sleep in the garden--/swallowed by fertile brown."
bravo.
p.s. i'm a little over halfway through Crime & Punishment now. it almost makes me cry every damn time i read it. i'm gonna have to buy a copy for myself.
p.p.s. i finally appreciate Andy Warhol. we should have lunch sometime this week.
Re: i don't think you knew you were in this songpearls_asideJanuary 30 2006, 19:16:32 UTC
yes. (i will tell you about it @ lunch)
yes.
yes.
yes. i mean, you're welcome. poetry is rough because you expire all sorts of thought and blood over each word, but in the end, if you crafted it well enough, there is no way of seeing all the work that went into it.
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i especially like "send me your prayers/so i sleep in the garden--/swallowed by fertile brown."
bravo.
p.s. i'm a little over halfway through Crime & Punishment now. it almost makes me cry every damn time i read it. i'm gonna have to buy a copy for myself.
p.p.s. i finally appreciate Andy Warhol. we should have lunch sometime this week.
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The emotional and intellectual levels hit in Crime and Punishment go beyond reason.
lunch on thursday?
thanks for the support... this shit took forever (though it didn't seem like it)
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yes.
yes.
yes. i mean, you're welcome. poetry is rough because you expire all sorts of thought and blood over each word, but in the end, if you crafted it well enough, there is no way of seeing all the work that went into it.
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