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[shibuya_rave]

Please let me know how I'm doing in play. Some obviously great points to know:

Characterization: How am I handling Neku? Do you feel I'm carrying his voice as strongly as possible within my tags? Are his actions, verbal, and physical communications up to par?

Character Relations: Do you feel there's a relationship here that's developed too fast,

Comments

[shibuya_rave]

Herp derp and this goes to show how little I know about how to actually use LJ.

More passive agressive to myself, anon. Pretty much kicking myself up the ass for not posting this earlier, so its not directed at anyone else. Changed it, though, so thanks for bringing that to my attention.

[shibuya_rave]

I'm trying not to make him grow too fast for the honest fact that it does take a while to see what direction he'll go in. Vatheon is different from Shibuya, after all, and the directions in which he can change take time to consider, since I hardly want him to seem to OOC. Lately I've dropped most of the threads he's been in; haven't been feeling up to it along with some RL stuff, but after I put him through a hiatus and canon review I'll take those back up with a more determined perspective on that.

Thank you for the pointers, they do mean a lot.