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Jun 26, 2008 03:32

100 fic challenge [#100.] Regrets, Zhoumi-centric
Title: 觅觅无敌 (Incomparable Mi Mi) Part 1
Length: 10,748 words
Author: shieldkitten
Beta: cynicalxcharm
Rating: G
Summary: Zhoumi strives to be better than average, because living his life any other way would only fill him with regret.

Part 2 | Part 3 | Author's Notes

he thinks that, as a musician, his role should be to put a smile on the faces of his fans )

fandom: super junior, fic

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shieldkitten June 26 2008, 00:18:59 UTC
Spot for cynicalxcharm!

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cynicalxcharm June 26 2008, 04:34:45 UTC
"It's Korean," she snaps, "learn some culture."

God, I say this to my friends all the time, and NO ONE EVER LISTENS.

and it's not as if it would be entirely scandalous of him to ask her out for dinner later.

Yes it would be. She'd never win am MC competition. Because she'd be dead. X^D

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shieldkitten June 26 2008, 08:04:19 UTC
Oh, Ciara, possessiveness is simply not possible when the guy you're fighting over is a manwhore.

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cynicalxcharm June 26 2008, 16:47:55 UTC
HEY. He is so not a manwhore. He only loves me <3

And Kyuhyun, but I can share with a guy.^^

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shieldkitten June 26 2008, 00:19:14 UTC
Spot for dear_whimsy

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YEY I HAS A SPOT. three, even. 8D dear_whimsy June 27 2008, 00:45:46 UTC
BACK. :D/ Sleepover is over, I am free to comment~ I read this last night. :D

I like how you opened this. It's very... idk. I like how it ties in with the ending. I like how true all of it is - I don't know what to point out or what to say, because it just fits. I can't think of a better way to have started. XD And it made me a little ;_; because the philosophy there is close to my beliefs, and those of my friends.

but Zhoumi thinks about his life, and how he doesn't want to spend the rest of it in Wuhan, doesn't want to be a teacher or a train diver, or another faceless, nameless member of a production line.

;_____; "One day, soon it will be my time to shine"~

(he still blushes a little thinking about the comment - 有一天我会像力宏一样当歌手,希望亲们也能支持我 - and he still checks back sometimes to see if anyone's responded, but they've all ignored him, only there for the download link on the first page)omg you. omg the Chinese killed me a little, and the way he checks back and is embarrassed by the comment - that is. So. Entirely. Him. I can see ( ... )

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Re: YEY I HAS A SPOT. three, even. 8D shieldkitten June 27 2008, 07:13:06 UTC
I have a kink for stories that tie endings to beginnings, and I tried really hard here. It nearly didn't happen. I was like, cursing that this fic and telling it to tie itself together or die trying, but I'm glad you thought it did.

I worry about your philosophy, honestly, because there's not wanting to be average, and then there's thinking you're never good enough.

I've never watched 海豚湾恋人, but I googled 下一站,天后 after Zhoumi talked about it and that was the storyline someone had written. Did I get it wrong? D:

Zhoumi's OC friends are so gratuitous, I love them so much. Look how I sneakily used Kexin to put the idea of going to Korea in Zhoumi's head. I am so clever ho ho ho. X^D

He probably is really FANTASTIC at sex, but I don't know! No one just has sex for me anymore, I was trying to write porn earlier today and my characters just looked at me and were like 'you want us to do what'. They keep questioning me and pointing out how things don't work. T_T

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Re: YEY I HAS A SPOT. three, even. 8D dear_whimsy June 27 2008, 16:30:32 UTC
I am all aw that you bothered to comment back to all my nonsensical flailing! :D/

Idk if it's healthy, it probably isn't, but despite that I kind of... cling on to it. I like to imagine it drives me to do better. Lol, not really.

No, I think I'm wrong, actually. :D It was just the first drama I thought of because it was a girl who wanted to be a singer, but I don't think she was actually a fisherman's daughter. There were just a lot of scenes by the sea, so I probably got confused.

XDDD Ohmygod, you. And aaaaaaaaah. I always feel worried that my characters don't talk back like that. ;_; People are like, "he/she doesn't do what I want them to do!", but I'm just all, "am I not feeling the character enough? D:"

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pureuda June 26 2008, 00:38:09 UTC
... sodifnwspdomfsdf
oh, my heart ;_______;

'童话竟会成为现实' or '童话无会成为现实' hit the hardest DDD: ♥ Just... ouch ouch ouch ;_____;
哥哥要加油啊! O-or I'll slap you with a dead fish IDK where my Chinese just went :|

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shieldkitten June 26 2008, 08:11:42 UTC
hahahaha let me try? 哥哥要加油,不然我会用死的鱼来打你一巴掌!

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hoyah June 27 2008, 07:42:27 UTC
oh my god. oh my god. i died. i died so much. *-* wow

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meiface June 28 2008, 03:03:13 UTC
I think my favorite part in this section is the way he babbles and then signs up for a public speaking class. It can't have come that easy, learning how to MC, how to talk. It seems so natural to him now, but I still think it's against his nature a little bit because of how quiet he stays too during interviews (though that's not entirely his fault/voluntary either). Still, this entire section has a lot of really believable characterization. :) It's just his nervous babbling pings me most. ♥

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