Going Down, Chapter Eight: Called Out

[shieldmaid1]

Pairing: Ennis/Jack

Comments

[anonymous]

Awww, you can't stop here, we need the rest of this phone conversation!
And Randall is there, oh no. Update ASAP please!

[shieldmaid1]

Bwah ha ha! I see my evil plan is working . . . . ;)

[midget_size]

Gah, what a cliff-hanger! I'm hoping Jack realizes that Ennis is ready for their sweet life! And if not, then I'm hoping Ennis won't give up and he drives to Taos to see Jack. You're killing me here, update soon, kay?

[shieldmaid1]

As soon as I can--I'm working on it even now. Thanks for reading!

[my_lil_darlin]

God, what kind of a place is that to leave us!! You can't do this to me.... *whining in earnest now* Will you have the next chapter up soon? Please! Can't wait.

[shieldmaid1]

Glad you're enjoying the suspense! :) I will have it up soon.

[gamma_ray00]

AACK....noooooo! This cliffhanger's gonna kill me!! I like this fic a lot. I have been reading it, but this is my first time to comment. I love the way you are characterizing Ennis' turmoil and his anguish. I hope Jack will at least talk to Ennis...hear him out. BUT...who is this Randall guy...please tell me it is not THE Randall..heh heh. I look forward to the next installment..

[shieldmaid1]

"THE Randall"--kind of like "The Donald," I guess? Glad you caught that--I was afraid the reference was too quick there. Thanks for reading!

[trekfan]

oh you TEASE! you got us hooked on this story, that he'll find Jack and you end it HERE! don't you go anywhere, you come back here and post the rest of this! NOW! :P

please? :D

[shieldmaid1]

Hope to have it up soon--thanks for reading!

p.s. I am almost finished catching up on Milestones--then I'll have a massive comment to post for you. I'm really enjoying it!

[trekfan]

aw thanks for letting me know you are enjoying my story. As you can see feedback can make a huge difference.

Linda :-)