Comments | shieldmaid1: Going Down, Chapter Thirteen: Worlds Fall

shieldmaid1

Going Down, Chapter Thirteen: Worlds Fall

Jan 24, 2007 20:15

Pairing: Ennis/Jack ( Read more... )

brokeback mountain, going down

Comments 20

New Worlds cwby30 January 25 2007, 03:04:49 UTC

Evenin ( ... )

Re: New Worlds shieldmaid1 January 28 2007, 18:48:20 UTC

Thanks so much! I'm glad you're reading and enjoying. I'm hard at work on the next chapter and hope to have it up in a few days. It'll feature more plot and less smex but that's necessary at this point, I think. :)

my_lil_darlin January 25 2007, 05:09:13 UTC

Love, love, love this AU. And squuueeeeee, Ennis went home with Jack, how wonderful is that?

The lovemaking took my breath away. *happy sigh*

Can't wait to see what happens next, of course!

shieldmaid1 January 28 2007, 18:48:55 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad you're enjoying it. More coming soon-- :)

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shieldmaid1 January 28 2007, 18:49:47 UTC

Hi Lindsey, Thanks for reading! I'm working on the bit with Lureen and Bobby right now, and hope to have it up in a few days (hey, we can't all be Maggie, right??). :)

poppyhoney_67 January 25 2007, 13:56:41 UTC

This was such a gorgeous chapter, carrying on where it left off, with Jack wondering how Ennis was going to react to the news, and Ennis worrying that he'd never see Jack again. I was relieved that Jack wasn't leaving straight away, giving him and Ennis some much-needed time together. Their love-making was just heavenly, and I was swooning over the way Ennis loved and kissed and caressed Jack's body so slowly and tenderly - no wonder Jack was panting with need - this was exactly what Jack wanted and Ennis gave it to him ( ... )

shieldmaid1 January 28 2007, 18:50:51 UTC

Hi hon, I'm so glad you liked it. :) I'm working on the next chapter even now, and I'll have it in your inbox before you know it. Thanks for all your support and loyal readership. xx

trekfan January 25 2007, 17:40:16 UTC

WOW I've been waiting fot this story for a long time. I am glad you are posting again. WELL now we got a situation here. And I'm glad THIS time Ennis isn't going to let Jack out of his sight. And I thought it's cute how Ennis (being a natural father) went and scooped Bobby up.

Now it will be interesting to see Lureen's reaction to Ennis and why he is there

more please

shieldmaid1 January 28 2007, 18:51:40 UTC

Thanks for reading! I'm working on it right now and promise there won't be such a wait until the next chapter. I too am anxious for this situation to be resolved.