A Black-and White World

Sep 23, 2008 21:41

Fanfiction: D.Gray-Man
Characters: Lavi, Lenalee, thinking about Allen.
Rating: G.
Word Count: 475
Summary: Philosophising on the subjects of compassion and the world.
Notes: Some credit should go to kay-willow, whose post about Allen and Lenalee as a pairing (or not) was pleasingly thought-provoking.

He's crazy, Allen. He wants to save the whole world. )

fanfiction, d.gray-man

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calasstriastar September 24 2008, 03:14:02 UTC
Ok, that pretty much made my night. I loved Lavi and Lenalee's discussion and thoughts on Allen's affect on their lives for better or worse. It was very IC and beautifully written. Wonderful work!

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usagi_alchemist September 25 2008, 00:51:49 UTC
Eee, thank you! :D

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pinkcarnival September 24 2008, 04:27:37 UTC
Oh man, this was great. I really, really liked this line:
"Allen saw everything in colours, but he wasn't content with that. He wanted everyone else to see them, too, and so he spilled compassion around him like paint wherever he went: bright, beautiful, and toxic."
Also the part where Lenalee calling herself and the others monsters was sad. Loved it! :0

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usagi_alchemist September 25 2008, 00:52:51 UTC
I'm glad you liked it! :D
And I'm pleased that someone was attracted to my serendipitous metaphor~

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