In Which a Delusion is Lived Through (1/1)

[shinaka]

Title: In Which a Delusion is Lived Through (I had an alternative title but that one sucked so I got rid of it.)
Fandom: Glee
Pairing: Kurtofsky
Rating: R
Author Notes: This is my first Glee fic and first serious smut attempt of some sort. I started writing this on the spur of the moment as a tumblr entry and then decided I could post it on livejournal

Comments

[selenerainbow]

Utter Excellence. Poor Karofsky...

[shinaka]

Thank you so much for the kind review! Hopefully my next fic will be a little easier on Karofsky. XD

[selenerainbow]

No problem! And hopefully 8,D I'll keep looking <3

[kirke_novak]

That was heartbreaking - the vast, painful contrast of Karofsky's dream and the reality is striking. He begins every day with a mantra of hate, instead of waking up happy from a nice dream. But then, it's a dream, it will never be a reality if he doesn't stop hating.

Sorry for gushing like that, I just think this was simply fantastic.

[shinaka]

Nooo, don't be sorry for gushing! XD It definitely makes me happy to see that people are enjoying this first foray of mine into Glee fic! :D

The reason I'll probably never feel as much for Klaine than for Kurtofsky is because Kurtofsky simply has so much baggage and emotion going on for both parties that I can't help but be so invested in how things are gonna turn out between the two of them. Will Dave finally stop hating? Will Kurt make that first step in reaching out to Dave, bully though he is?

XDD Sorry for the TLDR; but yeah, this ship just has so much to explore about it!

[justams]

Love this, so well-written and so heartbreaking at the end.

[shinaka]

Thank you so much for reviewing! ♥

[fatal_scribbles]

This is so well written, I can feel Dave's pain and anger and confusion seeping through the computer screen at me and it hurts. Thank you for posting this to LJ, I would never have read it otherwise, and it's fantastic, so yay.

[shinaka]

XD I should be saying thank you instead! Your comment and others definitely made my decision to post my fic on livejournal so worth it! :D

[fearfullt]

Very well done. I like the 'flash forwards' in place of gaps, it brought home the fact that this was a dream/fantasy and not reality. I also like the concept of "in another world".

[shinaka]

Thanks so much for your kind words! I'm so glad those ideas didn't come off too cliched or forced to you~