En Cuerpo y Alma

[shinebunny]

title: En Cuerpo y Alma
 (in heart and soul... thank you for fixing it!^^)
fandom: Bleach
paring: UlquiHime
rating: K+/T
a/n: a/n: This is just a bit of Ulquiorra introspective, to get a feel for Ulquiorra and Orihime a little more. So I can write more UlquiHime. <3 Some IchiHime and not-really AiHime (yeah, I know, and they thought UlquiHime was

Comments

[nisecal]

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!!! THE... THE LAST LINE AHHHHHHH! (I screamed aloud and my friends gave me weird looks, but AHHHHHHHHHHHH!)

this was so... Perfect. I adore your style. So... just like him. I've never read an Ulquiorra POV, but now I think that if I do it must be only from you. It really, really seemed like him. You hit the spot. So. Perfect.

I also love the way you used the side comments in the parentheses... and like... everything ... OMG this was soooo cool. *drools all over from mind explosion*

[shinebunny]

I love my parantheses (*hugs them*). ;) I'm glad you liked it (audible fangirling is always encouraged)! And I'm also pleased that I have a monopoly on Ulquiorra. Hehehe. ^_____^

[gully_moe]

Wow... That was such a nice simple story, yet the last line was very... I don't know how to say it. It just came as a surprise for an ending like that. Daring and abrupt.

[shinebunny]

Thank you. ^_^ I'm rather fond of the whole 'heart, soul, body' thing.

[coffee_gyrl]

OMG I freaking loved how you wrote him. You did such a fantastic job, the whole loalty test being delievered by Ulquiorra was freaking boss. And the slap was so hot, very well done my dear.

[shinebunny]

Oh, good. That was how I hoped it would read. xD

[ellethill]

Oh... OH... Oh, very good fic! Loved it. Last line floored me.

Long live fic and its writer! May you write more!

^^

[pure_rhapsody]

OMG FREAKING AWESOME! :D I hope you continue to write more UlquiHime fics in the future!