Where No One Owns The Eternity (Onkey, Jongkey, R)

[shinee_juliet]

Time forgetsthe deepest part of the human heartThree weeks into first semester, the boy who sits in front of him every musicianship lecture, a pretty sweet-natured brunette who has unfortunate taste in sweaters, turns around in his seat after class and leans over to talk to him at last. He's fairly sure he's been working up to it over the last

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[findthesunrise]

Your writing style alone makes me want to claw at my eyes in happiness. Wow, that sounded creepy, haha.

I followed this link because I usually ship OnKey and even though this is JongKey, I kind of still really loved it? How did you do that? What are you? Crazy wizard-person, what the hell.

Hey, would you mind if I watched/stalked you? I would love the chance to read more of your work. :D

[shinee_juliet]

thank you so much! <333
I was stuck with my writing for about a month or so...then saw a movie that broke the block and everything came out really fast on the paper. (OMFG I LOVE YOUR ICON....*JONGASM*...soory T_T I have an ADD. )

hehe no I'm not a wizard....I think. I'll check that ~_^
whoa~ sure. :) I'd love that If you watch me :DD
(but warnning- the other ones are PSYCHO. like, REALLY PSYCHO ones...so..umm...be careful? XD )
<333
thanks for reading ^_______^

[peanutsparty]

~Some things are best left unsaid, and unheard~

yeah...well written stuff these days are hard to find.
Glad i found this~<3

[shinee_juliet]

:DDD
<33333~

[dainty_empress]

I was randomly listening to this as I was reading your story and it added to Key painfully trying to work out his song, which was a really beautiful element in the story.

I really liked the heartbreak and the uncertainty. Some parts felt a bit forced though? It felt like you really tried to include every Shinee member and two Jinkis without necessarily adding to the story. I hope you don't mind me saying :/

I've been reading through your stories throughout the day and you're such a diverse writer. There's the cool, almost detached style you use in Paper Wings, Knights of the Rod and Third Cross, and then this warm and personal bit of writing... Sometimes you have me thinking you must be a man because it sounds too real to be secondhand, but then I second guess it again. In short; I'm impressed

[imvus]

This is (again) just filled with underlying emotions. I love the way you write it without using the actually words...things being left unsaid says more sometimes. Key's own indecision's regarding his own life just leaves him lacking. I love the onkey moments, and the Taekey too. My OT3 actually is ontaekey. But the Jongkey just felt just right in this story.