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SBB 2016 ENTRY #22: REPUTACIÓN (2/2)

Aug 02, 2016 15:03

Title: REPUTAción (2/2)
Pairing: Onew/Key
Rating: PG-13
Genre: Romance
Warnings: Slight slutshaming (not by any main characters)
Final Word Count: 12,298

( Tu reputación son las primeras seis letras de esa palabra. Llevarte a la cama era más fácil que respirar.

Despite the rumors surrounding Key, Jinki couldn’t help but feel intrigued by the other man. )

pairing: onew/key, shineebigbang2016: submissions, rating: pg-13

Comments 10

sabrina165 August 5 2016, 10:53:32 UTC

I dont know if I should write this comment in Spanish or not ^^
This is one of my favorite Arjona songs. I think you did a great job matching the plot with the lyrics.
What a wonderful surprise. Gracias♡

saraim September 27 2016, 17:59:53 UTC

Haha well I'm fluent in both lmao!
And its definitely one of my favorite Arjona songs. Though I'll admit I'm still trying to work out a way to write a fic inspired by Ella y El (because that one is fantastic as well).
Thank you for reading and commenting!

anonymous August 6 2016, 15:40:23 UTC

I don't really understand spanish, so i think i would have appreciated the song snippets better if there's some translation, but I really like how you presented onkey's relationship. It's not over the top and somehow relatable. I hope you keep writing more onkey fics~

saraim September 28 2016, 03:22:05 UTC

I'm glad you liked their relationship! The translation was in a link on the first chapter, if you'd like to take a look at it!
But thank you for reading and thank you for commenting! I'm sure I'll write more OnKey in the future :)

kpopforlife August 7 2016, 14:58:14 UTC

I really enjoyed this! Onkey's dynamic is one of my favorites. I really like how smoothly and.... nonchalant? their sexualities were dealt with. Kibum being bi, Taemin being ace ect. It wasn't a focal point of the story, just who they are. that's probably a really random thing to notice lol - sorry.
I also really like how well Onkey's personalities fit together in this story. Neither was trying to change the other, no judgements on the other's past...
i just... i really loved everything about this.

pinkpassiontae August 9 2016, 15:22:27 UTC

This was so fascinating because it dealt with important social topics in a way that wasn't so heavy that it overshadowed the love story. And that's what this is, a little love story & they have their own unique challenges, mainly stigma, & they're working through them because they are more important to each other than what society may say they should be. Just really nice & comfy.

imvus August 15 2016, 12:15:42 UTC

Jinki's attitude and the way he thinks is just amazing. It made me so happy that he didn't care about the past or what others said and he just loved Key. That he appreciated the fact that Key learned things that benefited both of them from others and didn't need to go on a ego trip about how he was not the one to teach him or needed to be the first to try things with him. If all people could look at the world this way though....the world would be a better place. I think choosing Jinki to be this character was a good choice. Well written, and interesting to read.