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shineedajeong

my JOJO..yes he is my JOJO..chapter 5

Jan 14, 2010 23:41

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onkey 2min

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mankadi January 14 2010, 18:12:54 UTC

*spot ^^*

mankadi January 14 2010, 18:27:46 UTC

.i became like a wild hungry wolf in front of the lame sheep,key
lol.. jinki xD

this chappie was good :)
plz update soon ^^

shineedajeong January 14 2010, 23:45:46 UTC

thanks^^

juphen January 14 2010, 18:51:00 UTC

aww...unfortunate, key didn't remember anything or he's just pretending?

straight huh?after making out with key last night?i don't think so onew hahahahaha

update soon ^_^

shineedajeong January 14 2010, 23:46:18 UTC

they almost..but they didnt..lol

danhobakpetals January 14 2010, 23:29:39 UTC

LOL Onew you're not straight! Stop denying your love for Key and confess to him! :D
& Key how can you forget about the kiss? :o
Haha 2Min, they are so childish<3~
I loved this chapter
Update Soon (:<33

shineedajeong January 14 2010, 23:46:38 UTC

hahaha..thanks^^

geenkey January 15 2010, 04:25:17 UTC

this fic is cute.... up date soon ne??

“i DID NOT. Do you think i am as pervie as you? Beside i’m straight. Even though i’m wearing my grandma’s stocking, ME still is a straight. Even though, i cry when i saw drama, ME still is a straight.Ok?” even though i kissed key lustful and groped him, ME STILL IS A STRAIGHT.

yeah.... yeah... whatever... tofuuuuu.... XPXPXPXPXP

rinni1905 January 15 2010, 05:29:59 UTC

This chap is shorter than your other chap, but it's cute so it's okay. I still enjoy it anyway.

Luckily Kibum didn't remember anything, if so he would be hurt when Onew said he was straight. OMG, how could he say he was straight when he lived in the same roof with Kibum? Everyone can go gay for Kibum and Taemin :)

I think you should express Jinki's feeling more details, and don't forget to write capital letter in the first paragraph or conversation sentences. Other than that, this chap is really cute :)