Smile For Me (one shot)

Apr 18, 2011 08:47

 
Title : Smile for me
Genre : angst?maybe?idk..hahahaha..
starring:onew/shinjiyeong
rating :pg
this is the first time for me using bahasa in my ff..dedicated to my lovely reader shin jiyeon :)


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jiyeonjiyeonjiyeonisheretopostacommenttoyou ext_514435 April 18 2011, 16:45:56 UTC
seriously gw komen panjang banget and in the end its gone somewhere.. lupa tadi gw komen apa.. haha

oia, inget. DAEBAKIDA!!! lee dajeong u r the best!
imajinasi lo adaaa aja. emang rada beda feel nya kalo baca ff english lo sama ff bahasa pertama lo yang didedikasiin buat gw. kalo baca ini ada feel terharunya. fyi, im your everlasting fans deh lee dajeong.

gw berkaca-kaca bacanya. actually alurnya bener2 ga ketebak, tapi pas udah mulai di tengah gw mulai bisa nebak alur ceritanya dan ngerasa sedih. perasaan lainnya adalah : GOOSEBUMPS! gw sendirian eh buset dah malem malem baca beginian. serem juga.. gw kira tadinya lo bakal bikinin yang romantis romantis ampe gw melting semelting meltingnya kayak baca ff ff romantis lo eh malah gw merinding disko sambil sedih sedih nih di sini..

bikin part 2 nya dong (ngelunjak).. jiyeon ketemu kim soo hyeon di syurga dan melupakan onew. haha.
eh daniel nama cowok lo ya? namanya kerap muncul menggantikan nama onew. halah. lo lagi mikirin si daniel mungkin. hehe.

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Re: jiyeonjiyeonjiyeonisheretopostacommenttoyou shineedajeong April 18 2011, 16:52:58 UTC
crap...
why the hell i wrote daniel instead of onew lol
i dont think its a good story..every1 know the end of this story by reading it half way lol
did i lose my ability to write?lol
should have done something better than this :(

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