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SHINee Fic Mix 2011 - capebuffalo

Nov 01, 2011 20:29

Title: Nursery rhyme of another summer
Author: capebuffalo
Pairing: Minho/Onew, Jonghyun/Key, Seohyun/Taemin
Rating: R
Author's Notes: Playlist used while writing. Thanks for the challenge, and hope you enjoy!

Original Work: To Be Free by kat-elric and argh

( They decide to serve chicken. )

pairing: member/snsd, rating: r, pairing: onew/minho, pairing: jonghyun/key, *2011

Comments 3

kat_elric November 2 2011, 02:56:06 UTC

Oh my gosh this was just beautifully done. It reminded me of poetry all the way though the way things just seemed to flow and move.

I loved the Jonghyun and Key interactions in this! So priceless and awesome. The one thing I had wished to write more into the original story was them, and now I don't need to any longer. You did so beautiful.

I also love the necklaces and how Seohyun has one too! Plus I really loved Key's demand for one at the end. ^_^

And his complaints about the chicken about killed me!

Beautifully done. Thank you so much for writing this. (I personally feel that it is better than the one I wrote. lol)

civilized_era November 4 2011, 02:44:46 UTC

I wish I had had more time to remix! Would've added more scenes in, etc. -- but yeah, definitely wanted to make it Jongkey-focused, and then Onho be more of that hidden pair you end up rooting for even before you realize you've started :D

I'm so glad you like it -- totally love your fics, especially the Fast and the Furious one -- and no way; your writing has such this sense of EPICNESS to it, reading your stuff is always like curling up with a nice, thick novel :) I hope to read more from you soon!

yapikao November 12 2011, 15:35:53 UTC

^^; tbh I was a little surprised to see my old username up there (considering I didn't even enter this challenge lol)! XD But that said^^; I loved what you did here :D and for the most part it works well with the original^^;! I love what you came up with^^;

I feel like linking your remix to the original fic as a side story/something (at least posted on my own journal) haha XD (would that even be okay?)

I loved the JongKey focus in this XD and how you ended it haha! XD ♥ Also the parts with Taemin/Seohyun ^^ work really well too. Thank you so much^^; for writing this~ ♥