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SHINee Shorts 2014: carefiction

Sep 29, 2014 23:08

Title: Pragma
Author: carefiction (minearebigger)
Pairing: Onew/Key
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 4496

( Jinki can hear the inner workings of everyone’s minds, loudly and clearly, in voices that are not their own. But Kibum is different, Kibum is the same, and Kibum is beautiful. )

*2014, pairing: onew/key, rating: pg-13

Comments 4

diamondacequeen October 1 2014, 06:29:13 UTC

Oh my God, this was so cute! At first I thought Kibum might have been able to read minds as well or something and that's why Jinki could only hear him when they were together. And I like at the end when Kibum talked about one change in his actions could have led him to not run into Jinki at all that day. I often think about stuff like that, so it was just nice to see. I can also imagine how empty? spacious? quiet? it must feel to Jinki after his ability is gone. I think I would be a little afraid at first as well. But since he has Kibum who he knows really loves him and likes him and really just enjoys being around him, I think he'll be fine. Onkey was so perfect for this!

life_not_knife October 2 2014, 06:57:03 UTC

I loved this so much. It was cute and goofy and you really made me feel what Jinki was feeling. I couldn't imagine what it must be like for him.

This was really beautiful,

Thanks for writing and sharing this.

Xx L xX

shinyshawol October 4 2014, 04:52:24 UTC

that was just so adorable! ^^

salome620 October 11 2014, 11:43:46 UTC

this is beautiful. i love how Jinki sees Kibum. they're simple and endearing. although i kinda wonder why Jinki's ability suddenly disappeared. hmmm...