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[shineesosexxiii]

Title: Blur
Author SHINeeSoSexxiii
Rating: R?
Pairing/Focus: Onkey
Summary: When Jinki finds himself confused and shocked. (is fail at life

Comments

[inucrazzes]

Hehe !

It's cute, very cute XD AND FINALLY ! Jinki and Key are
best friends =D

Muahahaha. OnKey shall rule over =3

I liked the alcohol thing XD and the parents bedroom
thing too XDD

Key is such a diva =D
All the best to you =D And I liked this !

Thank you for sharing !

[shineesosexxiii]

:D Thank youuuss~
♥

[owlbee]

i LIKE ittt..!!

how they totally have different reaction, really crack me up ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ
i mean Kibum was like : 'oh so we had sex?. .okay, whatever.'
while jinki WHIMPERED for losing his virginity. . ㅋㅋㅋㅋ

too bad it was so short, but i really enjoy it <3

write more, kay. i'll wait for it <3<3<3

[shineesosexxiii]

I didn't really wanna get into detail. >.< It would've been longer.

[mazokuwithwings]

THIS CRACKED ME UP ROFLMAO
I LAUGHED SO HARD

they look like fuck buddies after that
i hope their relationship would turn into something more :">

didn't do it on jinki's parent's bed? LOL

this is so ♥
hope you will write more stories~

[night_serenade]

“Then, why didn’t we do it on their bed?”

this killed me XD
gosh, this fic made me laugh so harddddd~

thank you for sharing~
I'll be looking out for more from you ^^
yay for OnKey <3 hehe

[rinni1905]

Haha, I laughed so hard when I read this, especially the part when Jinki said that Kibum stole his virginity. Aw, you shouldn't worry about it when you are a boy, Jinki ah!!!.

And Kibummie, he was such a dork, what with why didn't they did it on Jinki's parent's bed. Wah, Kibum was so naughty. I wonder they will try it? :).

So cute, and thank god, Jinki had some sense when he kissed Kibum back. I was afraid of his dense mind will interupt everything. I love this, thanks for writing.

[shineesosexxiii]

:D Is it bad that I'm a minor?
<3 You're welcomeeee. Lol.