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The Acid Test

Mar 11, 2011 10:13

Title: The Acid Test
Author: shineon11
Rating: PG-13
Summary: When Jessica stops exploring and is found out. Inspired by The XX.
Genre: AU
Word count: 1299

( There was dugeun dugeun but it wasn't deep. )

member: taeyeon, pairing: jessica/tiffany, member: jessica

Comments 7

anonymous March 11 2011, 04:20:24 UTC

Brilliant.

I wish there was a continuation though :/

Either way, I really like this.

Please write more? ^^

shineon11 March 13 2011, 01:56:56 UTC

thank you! :) I wish I had a beta though, it could have been better.

hmm maybe you were left hanging, sorry about the last line! I'll think about a continuation :) thank you so much for reading, I definitely will write more :)

anonymous March 11 2011, 07:06:30 UTC

I love XX. They're an amazing band.
Anyways, the story was wonderful but I do wish that there'd be some sort of continuation.

shineon11 March 13 2011, 01:57:52 UTC

aren't they? :) thanks for reading and for the nice comment :) I'll think about the continuation, sorry for leaving you hanging.

kaori9 March 12 2011, 21:35:39 UTC

Really nice. Made me laugh at some (true) parts in the beginning during Jessi's monologue. I love the interactions between tae and jess, but even more, the character development of jessica.

keep writing!

shineon11 March 13 2011, 02:01:20 UTC

yay thank you for specifying which parts you liked! :) thank you for the comment, I had hoped readers would like the interaction between them :)

i will!

cascadingascent April 3 2011, 07:18:43 UTC

I really liked the story, I was thoroughly interested the whole time, hoping for a continuation. ^^