Comments | shinetae: [Fic] The Happiest Days for Patzmelody01;PG13

shinetae

[Fic] The Happiest Days for Patzmelody01;PG13

Jul 03, 2011 21:42

The Happiest Days...
Couple: MinKey/Broken!MinKey, cheating/bff!JongKey, side!JongYu, MinhoxYuri (blegh...)
Genre: AU, Romance, Angst, Family
Rated: PG13
Summary: Kibum had lost everything four years ago, when he had stupidly turned his own self-doubting into a simple action he would regret for the rest of his life. He lost everything...including his ( Read more... )

fanfic, the happiest days, shinetae

Comments 14

I uploaded today anyways. shinetae July 4 2011, 07:52:21 UTC

For Patzmelody01

Re: I uploaded today anyways. patzmelody01 July 5 2011, 04:22:04 UTC

I loved this chapter!
Gah, Yoogeun! > <

-commenting tomorrow because I need to sleep-

Re: I uploaded today anyways. patzmelody01 July 6 2011, 03:39:11 UTC

Gah, Shinetae, have I told you before how much I love this series? No? WELL I DO, I DO, I DO-OOO!

Everything about the sight in front of him reminded Kibum of Minho so much. Perhaps because it was Minho’s two greatest loves: soccer and children.
Too much reminder for you, huh Kibum? :>

“You....don’t recognize me, Minho-yah?” Kibum found himself all-but-whispering out quietly, looking up at the taller man with a devastated expression on his face. Being yelled at and hated had to have been better than Minho pretending he didn’t know he had even existed.
Well maybe…you shouldn’t have cheated!
brickedI think this is the best chapter so far, after the one where Key cheated on Minho ( ... )

lessthan3moi July 4 2011, 08:32:30 UTC

YEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA THNXXXX FOR THE FAST UPPIE!! :D

Omg.. he lost his memories! I bet the bietch Yuri is gonna lie -.- pfff >< omo, I can't wait for more now ! XD oh well, I'll just have to be patient cuz you're a fast updater ^^ YAY! :D

thnx for sharing ! ^^

shinetae July 4 2011, 09:07:59 UTC

hehe bietch Yuri......shouldn't be laughing evilly at that...but I am...
I'm glad you liked it. :D

innocently_hot July 4 2011, 09:09:36 UTC

definitely better! and interesting too~ I've read 5 chapters straight and this chapter really the one I've been looking forward to. it was kind of giving me a mix feeling - hopeful, nervous, disappointment, relieve, happy - all in one! Can't wait to know Minho's side of the story~ good luck with the writing!

shinetae July 4 2011, 09:22:01 UTC

Ah jinja? That's a relief that it's better. :3 I'm glad that you liked it and I'll continue to work hard to make each chapter better. ;)
Thank you!

chocolatos July 4 2011, 10:35:29 UTC

wohooo... something hit minho's head pretty bad i guess? =))

nice chapt, cant wait for the next update
and there's yoogeun tooo *faint*

feversilo_ette July 4 2011, 15:34:03 UTC

Da fuk! If Yuri had something to do with this…Lemme go get my shank!!