[fic] The Boy Who Was Too Young (previously "Baby Daddy") Part 3

[shingo_the_pest]

Title: The Boy Who Was Too Young (previously "Baby Daddy") Part 3
Rating: mild NC-17
Pairing: OMC/Jim, eventual Bones/Jim
Warning: mpreg, teenagers who are really too young
Thanks: To both lifebehindadesk and hebrewhammer42 for the awesome beta, and harumi for brainstorming.

Comments

[pixelmayhem]

OMG! It's all happening so fast! I like it. Oh you broke my heart, Jim trying to gauge what life would have been like if he'd lived with his baby. But how does it pan out? Will we see baby Kirk? Does the kid come looking for Jim? Was it..I..ack! Oh oh. Damn damn. Abortion/adoption/foster-care/with the other parent? I think that's shorter than asking full out. I was wondering if the kid was gonna show up and Jim would have custody or have to raise it. (boy/girl) Or if Jim raised them for a while and then was forced to give up, or if he's never seen? Inquiring minds are on the edge of their seat!!

[shingo_the_pest]

Abortion/adoption/foster-care/with the other parent?

Lol! It's one of the above...

I hope the time change wasn't too abrupt. Starting with this chapter, the story will be jumping back and forth from teenage Jim to post-Narada. Chapter 4 will have more pregnant teenage James.

Jim trying to gauge what life would have been like if he'd lived with his baby.

Good! Jim never mentions having a kid of his own, but you could tell what he was thinking. That's excellent, because I had so much fun writing in between the lines in this chapter!

[paleogymnast]

So sad. Bones doesn't have any idea how much he's making Kirk hurt... *sniff* So, so painful. Want more, please?

[paleogymnast]

It was a lot of fun to write all the subtext in their conversation. Chapter 4 is written, I'm just waiting for the beta