[fic] The Boy Who Was Too Young, Part 6

Dec 13, 2009 11:14

Title: The Boy Who Was Too Young, Part 6
Rating: mild NC-17
Pairing: Bones/Jim, OMC/Jim
Warning: mpreg, teenagers who are really too young, reference to abortion
Thanks: To both lifebehindadesk and hebrewhammer42 for the awesome beta jobs.

Summary: Leonard can tell something is up, but he's not willing to push any boundaries between Jim and himself. And back in Riverside, ( Read more... )

bones, star trek, kirk, fanfiction

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scotchsour December 13 2009, 18:40:30 UTC
Sheesh James stop acting like an asshole. You(the writer) made me remember how much I don't like children.

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shingo_the_pest December 13 2009, 23:06:43 UTC
He'll get better, I promise!

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severusslave December 13 2009, 19:20:05 UTC
GNAAAaargh, boys.

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shingo_the_pest December 13 2009, 23:09:08 UTC
Lol, very true. He's just scared and angry right now, he'll get better.

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severusslave December 14 2009, 09:56:19 UTC
Yeah, I know, it's just that he reminds me too much of a guy I used to know. Note the used to. ;)

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shingo_the_pest December 14 2009, 18:42:16 UTC
Ha! Looks like that guy got ditched.

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weepingnaiad December 13 2009, 20:32:01 UTC
Poor Jim. He really should be elsewhere... somewhere he wouldn't have to hate himself and everyone around him quite so much.

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shingo_the_pest December 13 2009, 23:05:20 UTC
I'm not sure that place exists though.

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harumi December 14 2009, 00:14:14 UTC
Oh Jim. Poor kid. I can empathize with what he's going through. He's being a brat, but in his place, I'd be a brat too.

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shingo_the_pest December 14 2009, 00:55:14 UTC
I was a bit worried that he was being such a brat that he had lost all empathy with the audience. =( But this is exactly what I wanted to hear. ^__^

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k_e_wilson December 14 2009, 02:54:44 UTC
My reaction to basically the entire thing:
"Ffff------"

And to Bones' almost overriding Jim's file?
"DON'T YOU DARE, GODDAMNIT!"

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shingo_the_pest December 14 2009, 03:47:11 UTC
LOL! You're pretty protective of Jim, huh? *snuggles the boy* McCoy's going to find out eventually...

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k_e_wilson December 14 2009, 04:05:04 UTC
Not really- I just like him fucking his own life over and tripping up about it.
And I'd loose respect for Leo if he didn't just confront Jim 'bout it.

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