i'm alive! + [orig fic]
...I've been so productive at work today. Or not. orz I realized that I haven't posted in forever, so. Um. I'm still alive? :D I missed so much birthday greetings T__T I became kinda busy and I only too happily embraced my lurker modes. By posting this series of short-short-short stories I've been writing since morning, I hope to kickstart my back-
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I just read the prologue (burst!zero) but it looks really interesting! I LOVE SF + mystery stuff XD All the names and terminologies are a bit confusing, but I guess it will be solved when I read the following chapters. I especially love the way you described-or rather didn’t describe-the dead scientist by using lies and contradictory opinions and praises that cannot be true. It makes her really incomprehensible.
I’ll definitely read the rest when my life gets less crazy! …Or maybe I should leave drrr! Kink meme and come back to my livejournal. Looks like people loves my cutesy pics much more than my writings lol
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Yay ♥♥♥ Thank you for such lovely words ♥ Mystery has always been my favorite genre, so I end up always writing about it haha. I'm glad that the characterization of the scientist came off that way--I wanted to show that people can draw different conclusions about someone depending on their interactions and of course, everything can and cannot be true LOL
That will be much appreciated hee ♥
I'm always lurking on DRRR!! kink meme but I'm more contented in lurking. And leaving flaily messages ♥ OMG TELL ME WHERE'S YOUR FILL asdfghjkl
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Burst!One is superb, it could be read as a separate short fiction. I think you've really got a talent at describing a relationship. The interaction between the Second and the Ninth really got me ;o; The ending part was especially amazing--how the Second said the other's name (Cedric) instead of his own. That's what happened, right? My understanding was that the Second remembered Cedric's name although he didn't remember his own.
Burst!Two has MURDER!!! XD And TERRORISM!!! Andrei and Louvier are indeed interesting characters, but I feel strangely interested in Hewitt. I guess it's because he seems to be normal, compared to those two, but not exactly. And I feel that Heins is going to be the stoic male character I always have a soft spot for XD
I can see why you are concerned about influences of manga and anime. I can see it in some of the characters or their relationships, but I believe your fic will grow out of it eventually as the story proceeds. And I agree with pen_over_fist that you should include a bit more ( ... )
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Thank youuuu ♥ I think I can never stop writing Ho Yay between characters, be it fanfic or orig fic LOL Yes, that's right! I wanted to show that despite having a total memory wipe, he managed to remember the promise-of-sorts to never forget Cedric's name ;w;
Much like my tendency to see and write BL everywhere, I think all of my fics always somehow incorporates crazy sadists LMAO Hewitt needs to be there to provide all that big brother moe vibes ♥
I'll try to flesh out the characters and the backgrounds more in the following installments :D I didn't want to fall to that syndrome where while writing orig fic, the description of the characters tend to go overdrive -__-
Ahahaha, that will be great, thanks! ♥ ILUSM for these reviews/comments ♥♥♥
(RE: DRRR!kink - I think I know which one you wrote, but I still can't be sure;;;;)
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I am intrigued.
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The descriptions throughout this story are gorgeous, especially for the characters and their mindsets. Fon is adorable and very easy to empathize with for me, and Louvier is delightfully twisted. And I agree with caffeinexsugar about the scientist; you can sort of get a feel for what kind of a person she was, except you can't at all at the same time, if that even makes sense, and it's really, really fascinating ( ... )
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Um. Um. I'm glad you think so! One of the things that makes it so difficult for me to write orig fic is making characters, so. That definitely makes me happy ♥ I enjoyed writing about the ALICEs the most, since dragging bits and pieces of Alice in Wonderland names is fun LOL
Aaaack. Hmm. Maybe I'll edit this and put timestamps on them to make things easier to read ^^;; But basically burst!zero is the standard one, while burst!one and two are backstories. Burst!three returns to where burst!zero ended :D
Just to let you know, I'm kind of flailing and blushing and flailing even more now ♥♥♥ Thank you for reading and leaving concrit--I'll try my best to finish the remaining parts and hopefully by the end, everything becomes clear :DDDD
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Really? Well, I thought you made fantastic characters. In fact I really want to draw a couple of them. >_> ... except there aren't very many physical descriptions :|a
Timestamps would definitely fix that, I think. =>
ffffff I AM GLAD TO GET FLAILY BLUSHY REPLIES, THEY MAKE ME FLAILY AND BLUSHY BACK. ♥
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I try to conceptualize what they look like but I'm afraid that I'll accidentally describe some combination of anime/manga/tv show character(s) orz I think I'll definitely have to make a list of characters + profiles before finishing this mini-series 8D T-That's a great compliment! *___*♥
Haha, I hope the inspiration propels me to finish this by the weekend XD
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