Goodbye Forever

Jun 26, 2010 09:12

Title: Goodbye Forever
Status: 1/1
Author: bopeep_achu 
Pairing: !Taemin-centric, Taemin/Jonghyun, Minho/Key.
Rating: pg 16
Genre: Supernatural, Horror-ish, Angst, Romance, Quite! Gore
Summary: Manipulated version of Alice in Wonderland, but this instead is Taemin in wonderland, featuring Onew the Chicken, Minho the mad lanky legs and Kibum the crazy cat and some ( Read more... )

pairing: jonghyun/taemin, fandom: shinee, !fanfic, author: bopeep_achu

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bopeep_achu June 26 2010, 13:15:14 UTC
SPOT FOR MISS CIRCLE!

cos she likes large ass fonts XD

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miss_circle June 26 2010, 16:01:59 UTC
I intended to comment on this fic with the largest ass fonts I could find, but I refrain from doing so, because capslock is for spazzing, while serious comments deserve serious thoughts ( ... )

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bopeep_achu June 26 2010, 19:34:42 UTC
I'M SUPER GLAD YOU LIKE THIS!!! REALLY!
-hugs and never lets go-

lol then i guess this one is a serious comment? -gulps-

haha yeah XD Kara and Thunder.. though he didn't really appear at all in this fic ">> maybe I should let him struck the flowers.. epic? nah that's too evil ;w; -protects kara-
lol XD the chicken eating chicken XDD creepy tho O____________O; really? So I'm guessing you hate dolls ;w; sorry u.u;
oooh so that's where I get the idea XDD cos I watched pan's labyrinth but forgot I'd watch it and forgot that the name of the movie ;w; sorry DX
yeah :))) cos today i watched mtv showed the mv and so I had this idea popped.. so originally the idea came from Spice Girl's MV

that's okay ;w; this serious comment had really flattered me and I felt so happy now ;w; even happier when imagine minho hugging me from ebhind
nuffsaid ♥!!!

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mistresalie June 26 2010, 13:53:57 UTC
SPOT
omg my first spot ever muhahahahah. Can I? : ]
brb after i sort of finish an assignment! [omg school re=opening D:]

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bopeep_achu June 26 2010, 19:35:36 UTC
yes you can :"D
school re=opening? school just closed for me.. summer break oh yeah!
well enjoy btw :))

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mistresalie June 28 2010, 10:29:28 UTC
OMG. THIS IS REALLY, REALLY GOOD. and sad. but GOOD.
the doll concept reminded me of another fic... but Minho doing that for Key? so very new and very gore >.<
The part where Taemin ...has to leave was wonderful! NO, I DONT MEAN THAT TAE...leaving IS WONDERFUL DX i mean the descriptions and poor jong D":
I always believed in the concept whereby if you die in your dreams you die in real life. I have almost died in my dream before though [shot in the stomach 0.o] but i didnt die but you know, its a cool concept. but here, its just really sad DDDD:
the starting was really nice and totally ...-insert big word here-
captivating? XD
and the Kara flowers are SHO CUTE XD and LOL LORD CHUNDOONG XD all my fave people in a fic : DDD
well other than the fact that Jinki's a cannibal :x
LOVED IT ♥♥♥

ps lol the face-sucking MinKey

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night_serenade June 26 2010, 14:58:43 UTC
SPOTTTTTT~~~~ OMG OMG OMG OMG
Alice in Wonderland, psh this feels like its about me XD *shot*

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bopeep_achu June 26 2010, 19:35:54 UTC
ES IT IS ABOUT YOU 8D

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shan_ah_non June 26 2010, 16:16:12 UTC
IRONICALLY, I JUST WATCH ALICE IN WONDERLAND TODAY. LOL. COINCIDENTAL MUCH? ;)

i never really liked taemin but i saw miss_circle recommending the fic on her twitter so i gave this a shot.

ISOFUCKINGLOVEMINKEYHERANDONEWWHOEATSHISOWNKINDANDKARAASFLOWERSOMGGGGGG.

/flails

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miss_circle June 26 2010, 16:38:50 UTC
YOU STALK ME! I'M SCARED!

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shan_ah_non June 27 2010, 03:57:43 UTC
YOU STARTED IT
I SHOULD BE THE ONE GETTING SCARED.

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bopeep_achu June 26 2010, 19:37:17 UTC
ROFL XDDD I liked alice in wonderland a lot :"DDDD
oh so she did.. I THANK YOU AGAIN MINWHORE #1

THANKYOUSOMUCHFORFUCKINGLOVETHISANDTHECREEPYMINKEYANDTHEONEWTHINGANDEVERYTHING!

-hugs-!

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lifeinaphantasy June 26 2010, 17:38:10 UTC
That was amazing!!!! I loved it so much!!! The beginning I was like homygosh, loving this Alice in Wonderland theme. And those flowers were so adorable!!!! I loved how the dream went from sweet and sad to cute and then to a bit creepy... creepier... to flat out scary! But it was beautiful!!! Especially the ending when its in Jonghyun's POV. That was lovely!!! My stomach dropped when I started reading that part... oh my goodness!!! You did a wonderful job with this!!!! :D

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bopeep_achu June 26 2010, 19:38:43 UTC
yeah.. it turned 180 degree from cute adorable sweet and fluff, to angst, horro tragic and creep. idk XDD it just happened that way..
thank you.. I'm so flattered :"DD

^________________^ <---major happy face 8D

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