[Fanfic] Born Leader, DBSK, Jaeho

[shinme]

Born Leader

Title: Born Leader
Length: one-shot, around 1330 words 
Author: shinme
Rating:  PG-13
Genre: don't know so I skip this XD
Pairings: Jaeho

Summary:  Sort of Yunho-centric. About being a leader and about being in love.

A/N: Yay, my second Jaeho fic is finished. ^^ Shorter than the other one and I tried a different style in this. I love writing

Comments

[vrilly]

I love this. I really enjoyed reading it. ♥
Your Yunho seems very real to me! ;) And I love how both of them are kinda strong in their own ways.

♥ Gonna save this.

[shinme]

Thank you! I'm glad both Yunho and Jae seemed strong in their own way, that's what I believe they are.

I'm glad you liked this and thank you for commenting~ ♥ :)

[sakurajima]

I really love this one!!!!

I love the interaction between Yunho and Jaejoong ^^
And Yunho's inner thoughts, of course!

Your style is so different from what I've read before, kind of fresh.

Please keep writing!

[shinme]

Aw, thank you. Yeah, I tried a differnet style in this fic and I'm glad you liked it. It's fun to try different syles and I really enjoyed writing this, some parts kinda wrote themself. ^^

Thanks for your comment! ♥

[minlovesfood]

It was actually very cute!! ^^
at the end when you said
"and silently wonder what he has that Jaejoong hasn’t."
I thought 'ya what does he have the JJ doesn't??'

[shinme]

Ah, thank you, I edited it. I seriously need to find myself a beta because my english isn't the best. ^^;

[cereza_gakuto]

And Yunho can only stare into Jaejoong’s eyes until the stars start to appear again and silently wonder what he have that Jaejoong doesn't.

I love it *-*
♥

it's so beautiful :D

Really love it ♥♥♥♥♥♥!

Jae and Ho are so cute here
and Yunnie has his troubles
but Jae is to help him!

♥

:D

tke care~~~
♥

[shinme]

I'm so glad you liked it! :D And yeah, it's hard to lead the group alone so I'm glad jaeho is helping each other.

Thank you for commenting~ ♥

[ara_niey]

ahh~so sweet..being a leader sure has his own advantage ne?~^_^

[shinme]

yeah, of course it has~ He gets to have pretty Jae by his side, helping him ^^
Thank you for commenting!

♥