[Fanfic] Moving On (Or Falling Deeper), SuJu, EunHae

[shinme]

By: Shinme

Donghae was running, hair constantly falling in his face and eyes turning damp from the strong wind. (His father-) Maybe there were people on the street. Maybe the gray figures were actually moving, but Donghae's mind couldn't register anything. (His father, how could he-)  Not sure how long he'd been running, he suddenly stopped and

Comments

[shinme]

Haha, Donghae is a little bit crazy! But Hyuk we like him that way.

I'm so glad you got touched by this story! Thank you for commenting. ♥

[dbsj0001]

awwww~ how touching~
and i love that last line~
scary...but i find it sweet, “If you turn away, I will jump in the river,” Donghae warned and stepped forward, gripping Hyukjae's arm.

Hyukjae's eyes widened, but he didn't turn away.

And then there were lips. Just lips.
I can totally imagine Donghae doing that in real life!!xP

[shinme]

Donghae is sweet in a crazy way, right? x3

thank you for reading and leaving a comment ♥

[peaches_n_kream]

it started out really sad, but then you patched it up with an adorably sweet ending X3 hae, you leave no room for rejection <333

i absolutely adored hyuk's train of thought in the second part where he worries over drinks (and oranges!) and the unspoken conversation in the fourth part (the angsty undertone hurts in such a good way, ide <3)

thanks for sharing~

[shinme]

i blame the depressing songs on my sister's playlist for making this fic turn out kinda dark and angsty in the beginning. At least they got some happiness in the end. :)

i'm a sucker for angst and angsty undertones, seems like i can't avoid it, hehe. i'm glad they hurt in the good way and not the bad at least. :)

thank you so much for reading and commenting ♥

[6purplegiraffes]

god this is beautiful. i love how u described everything.

“If you turn away, I will jump in the river,” Donghae warned and stepped forward, gripping Hyukjae's arm. --> my favorite line

[shinme]

aw, thank you~ ♥

haha, donghae is crazy, but sweet. x3

[fanaeh]

“If you turn away, I will jump in the river,”
saying those word just to kiss him??
okay, i would so melt if someone said that to me :)

[shinme]

yes, and especially if it was donghae saying it! >.< ♥