Fire and Ice

[shinnyluvssuju]

Title: Fire and Ice

Comments

[swshawnee]

This was really interesting - not usually a fan of fantasy type fics or books or movies or anything in general, but this was really interesting. Very nicely written too, as usual. ^^ It reminded me a bit of Heaven's Postman, the movie that Jaejoong starred in - have you seen it? I mean, not the whole part about fire and ice, but the fact that if they actually get together, one of them will disappear. O_O So sad. Hmpf ;_; Really well done, anyway~ ♥

[swshawnee]

Also, forgot to say, I think you did really well in this style of writing, even though it's different from what you usually post. ^^

[shinnyluvssuju]

Thank you so much! I was nervous posting something in such a different style. I didn't know if people would like it or not, but I'm glad it turned out okay!

Thanks for your support my dear ♥

[21walker]

This is so interesting and it reminds me of the stories I used to read when I was little, especially Oscar Wilde's children's stories or maybe slightly of Rudyard Kipling. I don't think I've ever read Antoine de Saint-Exupery but I think I'll go look him up ^^

The ending was sad but beautiful, I am such a fan of bittersweet endings. I find that happy endings aren't always true to life, though it's nice to dream. Really liked this story.

[shinnyluvssuju]

This reminds me of a children's book too! Saint-Exupery wrote The Little Prince, and it's my favorite book of all time. Even though it's for younger people, I find that it's incredible for people of all ages!

Yeah, I usually write happy endings, so this was a change for me lol. This whole fic was sort of a learning experience, experimenting with different styles and whatnot. But i'm so glad you liked it!

Thank you so much for reading and commenting! <3

[light_on_oceans]

oh~ my heart ;~; but this is sweet too, in its own way :)

[shinnyluvssuju]

Yes, very bittersweet, huh? ;~;

Thanks for reading and commenting! :D

[monokalisto]

I liked it a lot~ I love supernatural things and I've thought about it...Figured Heechul would be water too... But it saddened me, of course ><
I actually thought that when they touched, Heechul would melt and put off Hannie... ;-; My mind is too cruel.
You're good with this style of writing as well, it's deep, meaningful... I like it when I have to read a story slowly, to understand the characters, the hidden meaning if there is one, to notice the details...
You just keep getting better, no..? <3

[shinnyluvssuju]

SHTERY OPPA~~~ *runs to you and hugs you*

Originally I was gonna make Heechul fire, and I don't know what made me change my mind, but somewhere along the line i just did. And I was thinking of making them both die when they touched because one offsets the other, but i figured a little ice wouldn't really put out a huge fire, only perhaps dim it... Heechul is small, anyway XD

This comment made me so happy oh my gosh ;~;

Thank you so much!!

[monokalisto]

You understood it's me... *hugs back then slips away to hide somewhere*

*laughs* I was the same before... It was for an RP or something and I had to choose an element for Heechul. At first, I chose fire but then decided on water... *points out a finger* But he'd been staying with Heechul for so long and it should have been cold around Chullie so he could have died. I'm happy he didn't, I'd have cried... ><

*ruffles hair* That's why I comment, no..?

Nah, thank you for writing this story, it was amazing~

*whispers* Oppa is really proud...

[ftino1]

This is great and it suits you for some reason haha. I loved it dear, the ending was too beautiful and the whole meaning too, friendship and love as well as distance, when it becomes unbearable and you make sacrifices, all I can say is that at least Heechul got one thing he had longed for, but lost what had a greater meaning to him. And Hangeng oh gosh. (Should Intell you that I cried? Because I did T^T) i always cry with your stories!!! This was no exception, it was so well-written even if you tried something new, it went well and it suits you, thank you for writing this! Also it's been a while that I've been looking for supernatural fics ^^ anyway thanks again, bye!

[shinnyluvssuju]

Awww, this made me smile~

Thank you so much! I was nervous with this style, but I'm so glad it was successful!

I'm so glad you like my writing ♥ it means so much. Thank you for all your support!