Halloween "Encounters" fic
A/N: So, here we are, Halloween eve at last :) I tried to write something scary but with a sweet ending and I hope it's a success, because I worked on it for like only two hours yesterday and this morning. And somehow whenever I write these two, it doesn't turned out quiote right, but not so bad either, if you know what I mean... so apologies for
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I mean, whoa.
This...was...whoa.
(Yes, I know, I'm being very eloquent).
Anyway. *gohom*
It's an interesting concept you have there. It left me with a feeling that is a nice combination of remorse and happiness. If we go by canon, Sano and Shiranui didn't have much time together and I can imagine that Shiranui would feel regrett over his friend's death. This way, he can move on and catch up with his old love, even though it's not really Sano, but his spirit.
It was GREAT.
Though, there was one thing that disturbed me: I can't imagine a bag big enough to hold a four feet long lance spear. Only for the blade you'd need a traveling bag. If it wouldn't get ripped withing the first hour, tops. Those things were sharp. And heavy.
But it gave a nice touch to your fanfic, so I let it pass ^^
I just love your style.
Thank you for writing this *hugs*
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As for the spear, i forgot to mention it, because I couldn't figure out how to put it... I though it might be a three-part staff... you know, the one you just fold and the three pieces held together by a chain?
Something like Houzukimaru, if you watch Bleach :)
But I really couldn't figure out how to put it in... perhaps that's what feels so wrong about the fic?
Dunno...
But thanks :)
P.S. and since it's a weapon meant for training and it has its years, I figured it wouldn't be as sharp as it used to... though enough to kill something... but even my letter-opened dagger could do that! XD
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