Invisible

Nov 10, 2009 20:37

Invisible

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"I know you’re upset, I know your angry, it’s alright I'm not throwing you in jail"

"Then what are you doing"

"I'm breaking the law" the word again being left unsaid.

As he opened the cell door Arthur wondered if he was under an enchantment, as he felt he had suddenly become invisible. He watched as Merlin and Gaius stepped into an ( Read more... )

merlin/arthur, fic

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magog_83 November 10 2009, 22:30:29 UTC
Hooray! At last, someone has addressed the fact that Arthur was RIGHT OUTSIDE THE DOOR, and also not deaf. I really liked this look into Arthur's thoughts and how he knows (i'm such a sucker for the Arthur knows approach), especially this bit...

He tried to lock eyes with Merlin but dropped them straight away. He felt that he should be embarrassed for the moisture in the boys eyes, instead he just felt his own shame at seeing the honesty of those emotions. Merlin was never ashamed, always honest and truthful and wore his emotions like a badge of honour.

That's such an apt description of them both - Merlin being so open and Arthur not, but at the same time you feel like perhaps he wishes he could be.

And I loved the little moment at the end with Arthur and Gaius, and Gaius asking Arthur to take care of Merlin - I could easily imagine that as canon *looks pointedly at Merlin writers* And then that perfect last line, that Arthur can't pretend not to care anymore.

I'm looking forward to this three part fic as well - is that a Merlin

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shiny4love November 10 2009, 22:43:51 UTC
Thanks I'm pleased you liked this as you know how much I love your work :)

Yep it is of course a Merlin fic as that is the only thing in my head at the moment.

Will try a
and get the first part up before the end of the week :)

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magog_83 November 11 2009, 00:19:24 UTC
I know that feeling. Someone tried to lend me a new novel today and I think I just stared at the cover for a while, having a "wait, where's Merlin and Arthur?" moment :D The show has completely taken over my reading and writing habits, it seems!

I shall keep my eyes open for your new fic :) :)

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lama_not_llama November 11 2009, 17:40:29 UTC
Aliiiiive!!!! She's aliiiiiive!

Babe, did you get my text?!

Man, i really like Merlin from what I've caught of it but haven't actually managed to find the time to watch the full series.

I'm glad you're still here and look forward to hearing from you again when you can post!

*hugs*

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shiny4love November 12 2009, 19:50:41 UTC
Hi love, sorry yes I'm alive and yes I got the txt thanks for remembering :)

Life as been a bit stressful for a while. I promise to email in the next few days with a full account.

Totally obsessed with Merlin at the moment and it's what's dragged my arse back to lj.

Hope all is well your end :)

Speak to you soon.

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lama_not_llama November 13 2009, 13:59:17 UTC
No need to apologise. I know that rl does take over sometimes. I was just worried about you! I'm glad that something had dragged you back in.

I want to d/l all of Merlin but I have a d/l limit now. Boo! At least the series aren't that long eps-wise so I probably can start ep by ep.

All's well this end! Have had a hectic summer but looking forward to a quiet winter.

*hugs back*

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