Comments | shinyboot: House/Chase

shinyboot

House/Chase

Jan 24, 2006 18:23

Okay, I really don't like this one, I had a really hard time deciding if I even wanted to post this here or not. In the end, I thought "hey, I love looking at other people's art, no matter how crappy" so I figured other people might feel the same way.

( Not work safe. )

Comments 36

kathtak January 26 2006, 20:59:59 UTC

Ahh. *insert stupid grin* I like where you're going on this one. The line of House's body is gorgeous (and that seems like such a weird thing to say o__0;).

k so, critique. Um. House's arm may be a smidge too long, though I'm not... sure. Your palm only goes down to about crotch-length, but it's hard to see when sitting down. I know this. I'd also make it more evident that House's fly is open. o 0; If that's where you're going. I don't know! Whatever! Um. His legs are a bit thin for his body. But maybe they are IRL. I've seen people like that. I haven't exactly studied Hugh's legs alot. x D;
Lastly (I swear to God), the chair seems a bit unrealisticly big, but only because I have a chair exactly like that, and it only goes up to about mid-back height. I'd change the style.

The end. Sorry. ^ ^;

shinyboot January 27 2006, 03:49:54 UTC

Thanks for the critique. I'll be sure to keep your comments in mind when I start the next draft. (Soon hopefully) :D

kathtak January 27 2006, 21:40:15 UTC

i can't wait to see the finished draft. : D!

sor_bet July 17 2006, 21:55:56 UTC

Yeah, something off about House's neck, maybe too thick? I don't know anything about art, so I should not critique at all.

Definitely don't change his arms or the hand in Chase's hair or the way Chase's eyes are squeezed shut or his arms or position. Guhuh. That's all, um, very nice. *memories, takes a cold shower*

*looks again*

Fuck, that's hot. That's all my brain is capable of now.

shinyboot July 20 2006, 16:28:51 UTC

Hehe, thanks!

PS- You're awesome for commenting on an old post. It makes me feel all loved and stuff.

My artist critique carisbethel September 2 2006, 23:20:49 UTC

If I had to say anything was wrong with this sketch. (Its darn good for a sketch) the neck is FAR to thick. The head looks great the bodies and proportions look good but the neck is off.

Great skill though ^-^