[FIC] Quietly, she opened herself up to the night

[shipmateee]

Title: Quietly, she opened herself up to the night
Author: shipmateee
Pairing: Joe/Miley
Rating: PG
Word Count: 1450
Warnings: slightly AU, angst, mentions of car accidents and comas
Summary: The world tilts, shatters and fades. Gently, she slips out of her universe.Disclaimer: Clearly didn't happen, guys

Comments

[venacavaa]

There is nothing.

Her universe is barren and dark. She drifts.

This really needs to stop because I'm not handling such a disaster very well.

P.S. "barren" is ace.

[shipmateee]

akjshdgjkgjhsfg this fic is so depressing i've realised. like, ugh, it really drags you down. but, yay words!

[venacavaa]

“Miley. Get a grip. You need to come back. For everyone. For me. Jesus, you need to be.”

♥

[shipmateee]

♥♥♥

[venacavaa]

...watching the moonlight spilling onto her sheets like ink until it is replaced by warm, warm sunbeams.

This simile, ah.
And the final line is so perfect and a wonderful way to end this.

And this: When she sees the light, she reaches forward and curls her fingers around it, holding tightly until she knows that she is alive.

I just don't even know. You used the word "unrelenting" which is incredible. I love that word.

Just this whole thing is too much and too perfect and it'll be going on my 2010 fic rec list even though this is like from '09 and a time when we weren't friends but by god, why weren't we?!

BRB CRYING MY EYES OUT.

[shipmateee]

AJSHGASJKHGSJDKGHF these comments omg.
I love them sfm, you have no idea. like, you've really made my day, Amanda.

OMFG YOUR REC LIST? AJSDAJKGHSDF I AM SO FLATTERED AND GIDDY RN, AND ALSO LOL @ THE FACT IT'S FROM 2009, AND YES OMG WHY WEREN'T WE FRIENDS

OH NOES, HAVE SOME TISSUES ♥

[venacavaa]

I kind of forgot to mention, the title is like a beautiful thing that still causes me some heartache but I don't mind because it's still that perfect. So yeah.