Comments | shipmateee: [fic] something about you (has got me)

shipmateee

[fic] something about you (has got me)

Mar 22, 2010 23:34

something about you (has got me)
jake/logan ; percy jackson rpf ; 1.702 words ; nc-17
| "Jake, where did you get this book?" |

( you turn me inside out )

fic, [movie] percy jackson, rpf, [pairing] jake/logan

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shipmateee March 24 2010, 16:27:46 UTC

ajgjkhdfgkkjghf ♥

will comment betterer in the morning.
ROFL

badcompany215 March 23 2010, 01:05:07 UTC

[i]“I don’t know. Because I wanted to fuck you, and this was the easiest way without messing anything up? Just thought I’d . . . indulge myself.”

Logan flushes and looks shell-shocked. It’s really quite cute. Eventually Logan stumbles out, “Oh. Right. Okay. That’s . . . okay.”[/i]

And this was when I decided I loved this story. XD

badcompany215 March 23 2010, 01:06:24 UTC

and i fail at html. i blame teh porn.

shipmateee March 24 2010, 16:28:39 UTC

akjhdsgfdjksfgh thank you ♥

venacavaa March 23 2010, 01:37:30 UTC

...he comes to the conclusion that jumping off a bridge will probably be the cleanest way of killing himself.
IDTK, JAKE.

I do not approve of his decision, but I do approve of the phrasing of this sentence, it's gorgeous like whoa.

shipmateee March 24 2010, 16:29:53 UTC

YOU ♥

and lol idek where that sentence came from, i was just like "yeah, this is probably what i'd be thinking about if i somehow ended up in this situation"

venacavaa March 23 2010, 01:41:03 UTC

Logan’s staring intently at the pages...
I love that you made him stare intently at the pages, like INTENTLY. idk, that just makes it so wonderful in my book. I seriously can picture Logan doing this, he's probably chewing on his bottom lip in concentration too, with his eyebrows drawn together and being all super focused.

...Jake ventures carefully.
You said "ventures" instead of just "says" or something like that. ♥
For some reason, this means a lot to me.

Oh god(s), the lack of sleep must be finally getting to me.

If you've noticed, this is the second comment for the first three lines.
Your writing just makes me fangirl all over the place, like your iTunes for the Jonas Brothers.

shipmateee March 24 2010, 16:32:52 UTC

he's probably chewing on his bottom lip in concentration too, with his eyebrows drawn together and being all super focused.
THIS.

okay, you noticing that i used "ventures" instead of "says" means a lot to me, because like, i really hate using "says" so i always try and find different words and just, ofc you found it, ofc. and like, you fangirling over my writing makes me fangirl over you, so like, idek what's happening there.

like your iTunes for the Jonas Brothers
LOL OMG I JUST BURST OUT LAUGHING OH GOD. SUCH TRUFAX.

venacavaa March 23 2010, 01:42:48 UTC

"...Can you, uh, give me the book back now? Don’t read anymore. Just, you know. Hand it over.”
I can just imagine Jake scratching at the back of his neck with his ducked down and looking up in that awkward way when you just want to crawl under a rock, sort of. If this makes sense.

I'll stop now, I just really enjoyed Jake's nervous rambles.

shipmateee March 24 2010, 16:35:05 UTC

I'VE REALISED I LOVE NERVOUS RAMBLES, AND THAT I POSSIBLY LOVE WRITING THEM INTO FICS TOO MUCH.
W/E. NERVOUS RAMBLES ARE ALWAYS RELEVANT

as is callboy!fic which i can't stop thinking about and i think i'm going to go do some research for rn