[fic] fall head first (like paper planes)

Apr 01, 2010 21:34

fall head first (like paper planes)
luke/percy ; percy jackson fiction ; 615 words ; pg-13
| "It’s just jam, Percy" |

notes: for amanda (venacavaa), because i never would've noticed the pegasus jam in my fridge without our picture a day thing ♥

and my body goes )

fic, [movie] percy jackson, [book] percy jackson, [pairing] luke/percy

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venacavaa April 2 2010, 01:38:58 UTC
Luke tastes of sunlight and warmth and lazy summer afternoons.

(Percy thinks he might like it better than jam. Maybe.)

Ofc, it's only maybe. Percy would be a stubborn sonuvabitch like that, but he's still cute and Luke still loves him and I still love you and your writing and jam!fic so it's everything in the world is okay, you know.

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shipmateee April 2 2010, 01:52:56 UTC
oh, ofc he would, pretty silly little thing he is.

like, i know this fic isn't a masterpiece obvs, but i really like it because it's tiny and simple and reminds me of summer and i love it and you.

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venacavaa April 2 2010, 02:13:02 UTC
oh, ofc he would, pretty silly little thing he is.
lol'ing irl, brb.

i totally understand this. whenever we defeat the long-list of enemies (which really only has two rn: Father Time and The Pond), we shall make a scrapbook that tells the epic love story of beth and amanda. and this fic would be in it, like on it's own little page with cutesy, nifty little pink and white polka dotted ribbons and little corner settings or whatever they're called. and it'd be all: the summer fic that makes them think of each other.

(and makes amanda think of watermelon for no reason other than her weird association of summer to watermelon...even though it's not at all her favorite.)

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shipmateee April 2 2010, 02:23:26 UTC
like can i just say that i might've squeaked a little when you started making all those little references to scrapbooking the epic love story of beth and amanda? because i did. i mean, i really kind of love doing those kinds of things, lmao. ribbons and corner settings and stickers and buttons and polka dots and stripes and all that jazz makes me much too happy for my own good.

(watermelon is not my favourite melon either. i prefer honeydew, tbh. LOL SUCH A SERIOUS RESPONSE.)

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venacavaa April 2 2010, 01:41:50 UTC
amanda, stop daring me to write fic. (except, you know, don't.)



I'm really happy that you wrote this, even though you totally had to because I dared you to, but even so, I don't know if anyone else could have made jam!fic not cracky or whatever, but you did and it's fantastic.

Just because of you, I might have to have AU Luke make Percy breakfast in bed that's really just toast and jam because Percy loves jam and Luke can't cook (omg, another idea...Luke and Percy trying to cook and almost burning down the apartment, which would totally happen) but anyway, it'd just be one big inside joke and shout-out to you and a declaration of our love. Right?

(I need an AU fic icon. Just one that says in sparkly text: AU FIC. And a Pixie Lott icon.)

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shipmateee April 2 2010, 01:56:38 UTC
ikr? how this didn't turn out as crack fic, i do not know. i mean, it's percy. and jam. (and luke.) that's just ridic, really.

akjdshgdjskfhg okay you have to have that breakfast in bed scene okay, because it makes me get all these warm fuzzy feelings inside, and it's like a declaration of our love, and just asdkajhdsgjdhsg. i love those boys sfm. (if they try to cook, percy has to wear a cutesy apron. the end.)

(GODS, I NEED YOU TO HAVE AN AU ICON LIKE THAT. AND I CAN MAKE YOU A PIXIE LOTT ICON IN MY NEXT BATCH, OFC.)

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venacavaa April 2 2010, 02:09:04 UTC
just typical for your extraordinary nature, really. because you would pull this off flawlessly like you do.

(oh yes because percy = girl!percy and since percy = logan, girl!percy = girl!logan, and goodness, it's just like you said before: we're so good at math(s)!) [did you see that sneaky little "s" I added? i bet you did. it's just that i'm trying to be across the pond in spirit instead of irl.]

OH PIXIE LOTT, YES PLZ. I WOULD BE FOREVER INDEBTED TO YOU, BUT...THAT'S NOTHING NEW.

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shipmateee April 2 2010, 02:27:03 UTC
(I LOVE YOU. JUST FOR THAT WHOLE LITTLE EQUATION YOU DID WHICH WOULD ONLY MAKE SENSE TO US, AND ADDING THAT LITTLE 'S' ON THE END OF MATH TO BE HERE IN ~SPIRIT~ AND I FEEL THE APRON HAS TO BE POLKA DOTTED. AND BLUE. AND PINK. JUST BECAUSE.)

I WOULD BE FOREVER INDEBTED TO YOU, BUT...THAT'S NOTHING NEW.
LOL'ING IN RL.
ALSO, I THINK I'LL HAVE TO MAKE A STARFISH ICON. AND A SEA-HORSE ONE. BECAUSE, YOU KNOW. OFC.

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forochel April 2 2010, 03:45:32 UTC
THIS IS ADORABLE 8D

also the idea of percy pigging out on jam is very...compelling. saviour of the world! several times over! also has severe weakness for jam!

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shipmateee April 2 2010, 23:04:09 UTC
THANK YOU SFM ♥

saviour of the world! several times over! also has severe weakness for jam!
OMFG I CAN'T STOP LOL'ING AT THIS.

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forochel April 3 2010, 09:09:46 UTC
:)

it is a very good thing that his enemies do not know of this jam thing, yes?

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funny003 December 19 2010, 00:20:40 UTC
Hey, I'm Kara and I'm new to Live Journal, even though I'm new I've decided that I like you. I have decide this because:
A)Your icon and your emotion-thing is a photo of Taylor Swift. I love Taylor Swift, she is one of the most epic things on the planet.
B)This fic is flawless. Every word of it is utter perfection. Also you got me obsessed with Percy/Luke. BTW, I love all your Percy Jackson fics, including the RPF ones.
C)When I was creeping your comments on your PJO fics I read that you were British and I'm, like, obsessed with British people.

'Kay, right now I feel like a total creeper but whatever......I needed to comment because I've this like 50 times and it still surprises me how amazing it is, and I thought you might like it with me commenting...if not, sorry for bothering you.
(Woah, this is a long comment......)

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shipmateee December 19 2010, 01:40:35 UTC
First things first, welcome to livejournal! :)

Secondly, can I just say that this is like, one of the nicest comments I've ever received. Thank you so much!
I love to just get comments on my fic in general, but saying that you love all of them is so amazing to hear, and I just can't tell you how happy that makes me! And yes, I am British, I'm surprised you noticed from all your creeping (which is totally fine by the way, because I tend to do it all the time :P) And yay! Another Taylor fan ♥

But yeah, thanks again, and please don't feel like a total creeper! I'm really giddy you commented and that it was so long and lovely :D

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funny003 December 19 2010, 21:16:49 UTC
Thanks! :)

Oh, it was no problem. That's good, I love making people happy :) That's so cool, British people are epic. Yeah, I'm a pretty good creeper, if I do say so myself ;). Yeah, I love T-Swizzle, and I have a theory that she is Percy's celeb crush, since he clearly has a thing for blondes. Have you ever seen Taylor in concert?

Thanks for replying back and reading my comment and for reading this one too.

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vamphime February 5 2012, 09:53:48 UTC
"Percy watches mesmerized as Luke licks the jam off the thumb, kneeling onto the bed before Percy." This is the part where I had to remind myself that this was rated PG-13
I don't know I just like your writing style in general.

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