Comments | shipmateee: [fic] these are the dreams we should be having

shipmateee

[fic] these are the dreams we should be having

Feb 04, 2012 17:11

these are the dreams we should be having
hunt/brandt ; mission: impossible - ghost protocol ; 2081 words ; mature
| A series of mornings seen through the eyes of William Brandt. |

a/n: this is nowhere near as serious as the summary makes it out to be. no, really. this is mostly a pile of self-indulgent fluff. i started writing this for hope-calaris for her ( Read more... )

[pairing] hunt/brandt, fic, [movie] mission impossible

Comments 28

hiddencait February 4 2012, 17:43:26 UTC

*guh* Oh man this was lovely! And bedhead!Brandt is now living in my brain like whoah...

shipmateee February 5 2012, 19:27:47 UTC

Thank you, I'm glad you liked it :)

kat8cha February 4 2012, 18:14:38 UTC

Oooooooooooh this was sweet. A+ fic!

Loved the tracing words on Brandt's back and Brandt not being a morning person.

shipmateee February 5 2012, 19:28:31 UTC

Thank you so much for the comment. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

lucdarling February 4 2012, 18:41:37 UTC

This was so gorgeous. wow, I loved each snippet and the details of characterization.
My favorite is probably the first part though, the He could get attached to this one. It's such a powerful statement and then you introduce the reader to mornings after, showing the progression of their relationship. Absolutely lovely piece.

shipmateee February 5 2012, 19:29:31 UTC

Thank you for the lovely comment!

hockeyiris February 4 2012, 19:08:50 UTC

This. So much. Love. I can't even. I adore this. If it were easier to go back on it, I would read again. And again and again. I don't even know if I have a favorite. The tracing words in his skin is definitely at the top. I have a weakness for lazy morning fic and writing/ drawing on skin, visible or not.

I can sleep with these pictures in my head now. Thank you.

shipmateee February 5 2012, 19:30:24 UTC

Omg, thank you, this is such a lovely comment. I also have a weakness for writing/drawing on skin, so I get slightly giddy at seeing people say they liked that part :)

credulesque February 4 2012, 20:06:19 UTC

SJDHALKSJFHLSKDJF YESSSSSS. THIS WAS SO GOOD. AND IT ALL TOOK PLACE IN BED WHICH IS WHERE I AM NOW EVEN THOUGH IT'S 3PM hahawhat.

(and Brandt can't help but wrinkle his nose when some sloshes over the rim onto the table) I loved this side of Brandt showing through lol, because that's something i can sympathise with. Also that ethan wouldn't give a damn tbh.

Brandt's not even going to argue against that because sleep is pretty much the best thing ever invented in his opinion Another true statement :')

Brandt's legs are spread around Ethan's hips, and he feels a little wanton, a little dirty, Ethan fully dressed and Brandt entirely bare and messy, still coming down from the shockwaves of his orgasm. nnnghhhh fuck yes, this was good shit *nods sagely*

I wish i could be more eloquent about this but i literally just woke up which is embarrassing. But !!! yay and i hope you write more because that would be awesome :D

shipmateee February 5 2012, 19:35:20 UTC

LOL OMG NO IT'S FINE, I OFTEN STAY IN BED TILL 3PM WHEN GIVEN THE CHANCE, SO.

yeah, in my mind Brandt is all WHAT IS WRONG WITH YOU, USE A COASTER YOU HEATHEN, IT'S GOING TO LEAVE A RING and Ethan is just like LOL IDGAF BUY A NEW TABLE

i was totally going to put like a whole section of just sex in this but it didn't really seem to fit with the rhythm of the fic properly and i just thought eh, i'll just go write some pwp another time and just have slight ~allusions to it in this. WHATEVS, THOUGH, I'M GLAD YOU LIKED THOSE LITTLE MENTIONS.

well, you already know i'm writing that backstory fic for sabine so there's that, and i'm also working on another five times fic which might actually just be pure pwp for almost the entirety of it. SO ~YAY~