Comments | shipperjunkie: [FIC] Next Time and the Time After That (Damon/Elena) M

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[FIC] Next Time and the Time After That (Damon/Elena) M

Aug 12, 2012 02:33

Title: Next Time and the Time After That
Author: shipperjunkie
Characters/Pairing: Damon/Elena
Word Count: 2,168
Spoilers: Post 3x22
Summary: Elena and Damon, biting, their first time
Author’s Notes: So okay you guys, I haven't really written anything in forever. Like, ten years? I'm much more comfortable in my role as fanfic enthusiast. Basically this was ( Read more... )

what even, vampire diaries, damon/elena, fic

Comments 36

gabby227 August 14 2012, 03:00:45 UTC

Oh my God. That was amazing. Just...wow.

I have a hard time believing you haven't written in a while. I wish I could write as well as you do.

shipperjunkie August 14 2012, 03:28:24 UTC

Oh wow, thank you so much! What a lovely compliment.

I've written snippets here and there but nothing posted since 2003, in the GIlmore Girls fandom. I lose my train of thought and motivation easily and then happily read everyone else's fic. :)

Holy hotness! lovexandxfate August 15 2012, 04:42:16 UTC

You, my dear, have not lost anything with the time off of writing! That was incredible! Yes, it was hot, I mean WHOA! But it was more than that. You told a story and kept their emotions alive and turned this thing into something more. This is really really really well done and I hope you write more of these two in the future!
~Meg

Re: Holy hotness! shipperjunkie August 15 2012, 04:56:42 UTC

Aw, thank you! :)

I'm so glad you enjoyed it!

Thank you for taking the time to review, I really appreciate your sweet words.

upupa_epops August 20 2012, 00:28:12 UTC

I am here!

You know what I love? How... casual this is. A bit of clumsiness, loads of fumbling, not many words, loads of feelings. This isn't some mindblowing and excellent sex, it's just sex. Not bad, good enough, but no fireworks. And Damon is right, they'll probably blow it a few times before they get it absolutely right. Because, seriously, if the first time with someone is the best sex of your life, why even bother having sex for the second time ;).

Awww, Damon finishes too soon because he got bitten. This boy and his submissive streak <33333.

Thank you for writing this!

shipperjunkie August 20 2012, 00:49:11 UTC

THANK YOU! <3

I love pretty much everything you said, thank you thank you. It really means a lot to me. :) Aw, Damon and his submissive streak indeed. <3