[FIC] Hot Mess (Damon/Elena) M/NC-17

[shipperjunkie]

Title: Hot Mess
Author: shipperjunkie
Characters/Pairing: Damon/Elena
Word Count: 4k
Spoilers: Post 3x22
Rating: M/NC-17
Summary: Elena’s plans don’t always work out the way she expects.
Author’s Note:  As always it seems, this happened because of upupa_epops and badboy_fangirl.  A special thank you to Marta for looking this over.
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Comments

[fluffyfrolicker]

ok on my phone, so this will be short.

NEVER STOP WRITING D/E PORN.

[shipperjunkie]

LOL! Thank you! <3

One of these days I want to try writing something that *doesn't* include porn. See how that feels.

[fluffyfrolicker]

:O WRITE ALL THE THINGS! \O/

[shipperjunkie]

OKAY THEN, SINCE YOU SAY SO. <333

[badboy_fangirl]

OMG, how great is this? I mean, seriously, HOW GREAT IS THIS???

Let's start with this opening:
Elena wasn’t sure how this kept happening.

“This can’t keep happening,” she protested weakly when Damon’s lips slipped from hers to nip at the line of her jaw and nudge her head to the side. “We shouldn’t be doing this.”

“I know, we’re awful people,” he readily agreed in her ear, briefly catching the lobe between his teeth. She opened her mouth to speak, right when he began trailing open-mouthed kisses down the side of her throat, and her train of thought derailed entirely, just crashed and burned.

Because the moment Damon said, I know, we're awful people, I was like, I'M GOING TO LOVE THIS FIC SO MUCH.

And I was right. You just have such a special ability to incorporate the strength of their emotion and angst into every little moment so effortlessly. Some examples:

How he couldn’t seem to let himself waste an opportunity to get his mouth on as much of her skin as he possibly could, as quickly as he could, as if fearing she’d push him

[shipperjunkie]

>> OMG, how great is this? I mean, seriously, HOW GREAT IS THIS???

I'M SO GLAD YOU LIKED IT! I wanted to blather on about it last night but didn't want to jinx myself.

>> You just have such a special ability to incorporate the strength of their emotion and angst into every little moment so effortlessly. S

This legit just made me tear up. :'-)

>> This is just so sweet and hot and romantic...and Damon. I hate them. They have ruined me.

Thank you! <3 Bleh, they've ruined me, too

[bogwitch]

Hot mess, indeed, in so many different ways. Great stuff!

[shipperjunkie]

Thank you so much! <3

[elvishgrrl]

As you already know, I think this fic is amazing! So, so good. Just wanted to leave you another review! You deserve every last one of them! :)

[shipperjunkie]

Thank you so much, Jenn! <3 And for tweeting about it. :)

[petitebelette]

Not sure if any smut has had me clutching at my heart, crippled with feels before quite like this before. UGH. GUH. AMAZING.

[shipperjunkie]

THANK YOU!! <3 What an awesome review, thank you so much for taking the time to comment. I really appreciate it and I'm so glad you liked it.