OMG I loved this. Although I want to know who seungri's illicit, secret relationship was with lol. Anway I really like this style, when the story cuts to different memories and stuff and back to the central story. It makes me think more while reading it.
Hmm I always tend to want to write this style anyway. I find writing present-tense a little bit hard, so this is always easier. But that's interesting, how in this style it makes you think and pay more attention to detail...
hahah feed seungri broccoli!? if it makes you write like this, then i'll buy a broccoli farm even though seungri isn't my favourite member nor nyongtory my favourite pairing, by far.
it's so bittersweet, but really great to see how it all ties up and works out just perfect in the end.
and it's lovely how it's not just seungri's lost moving from one partner to another comes through, but jiyong's insecurities as well. and not in a needy way, but very delicately, only to be completely n utterly swept away by the small vignettes of their time together. just breathtaking. keep writing!
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*coughDaesungcough*
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And it's GRi! I can't believe Ri married Ji. Awww. :3 /snuffles
Love that the way you wrote, especially the characterisation of Seungri's exes.
The ending is pretty damn perfect. Love. <3
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Seungri's exes = errbody loves Seungri gratification.
Thanks!
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it's so bittersweet, but really great to see how it all ties up and works out just perfect in the end.
and it's lovely how it's not just seungri's lost moving from one partner to another comes through, but jiyong's insecurities as well. and not in a needy way, but very delicately, only to be completely n utterly swept away by the small vignettes of their time together. just breathtaking. keep writing!
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Thanks a lot for writing and yeah I'll keep writing (I have written in a whiiile haha)
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