Comments | shippingvictory: The Fall

vvipforseungri in shippingvictory

The Fall

Dec 26, 2012 12:24

Title: The Fall
Rating: PG-13
 Pairing(s): GRi
Length: 2118 words 
Summary: The one thing Jiyong is afraid is the fall.
Warnings: None.
Notes: This was my ficmix that I wrote, a remix of victoriousdragon' Alone in Paris. I wrote it about 3 hours before it was due and after three different attempts at remixing other stories. Angsty, as usual, and I' ( Read more... )

genre: angst, pairing: seungri/jiyong, author: vvipforseungri, fandom: bigbang, fictype: ficmix

Comments 5

cuz_im_a_vip December 26 2012, 23:15:34 UTC

I really liked this fic! I had an idea it might have been you who wrote it, and I was right! Lol. I agree, the end seemed a little sudden, but overall I enjoyed the piece. And you broke my heart at the part when Seungri says things have already changed T_T Why do you do this Martina?! First my GRI angst and then the OT5 feels. *Sobs* Darn you Jiyong and your inability to keep it in your pants!

vvipforseungri December 27 2012, 17:20:42 UTC

I feel like this fic could have been better had I worked more on it. Like it could have been longer. I really wish I had spent more time working on "the fall" and perhaps connecting it in more ways...

THIS IS HOW I ROLL, BABY. SCREWING UP FEELS LEFT AND RIGHT.

trippydesu January 16 2013, 02:33:12 UTC

Wow, I'm surprised that there aren't more comments on this =0 Then again, I'm surprised I read it whole considering I'm not a GRi shipper XD but damn, you've got some good writing skills; I could FEEL the fear from GD which was terrifying x.x Though all I could keep thinking was "What French model is gonna go for an Asian guy with bright pink hair who introduces himself as G-Dragon?" XD But if anyone could snag a girl with that look and intro, it'd be GD XDDDD Anyway! Getting off-track, I'm having a love/hate feeling with the ending mostly cuz it's all... cliffhanger-y... but I think I like that haha
Thinking about it now, with Ri's scandal in Japan, maybe HE'S just as imperfect as GD...
Anyway (again) great fic! ^_^

vvipforseungri January 18 2013, 10:19:54 UTC

Haha, this is just a repost from where it was posted initially, so the comments are on the other post LOL and not a gri shipper? What do you ship?

Thanks very much! And let's be real, GD is probably a sex fiend and has his ways. French model or not.

trippydesu February 19 2013, 01:38:32 UTC

Oh! Okay good! You deserve more positive comments ^_^ My OTP is GDYB (I like to think their friendship is more of a bromantic relationship XD) but I like GTOP and ToDae too. I mean, I've read GRi in the past, but not a whole lot haha.

True... I think if GD said he was a virgin in real life, the whole world would laugh simultaneously...