Comments | shiroandfubuki: Follow the Nightingale: Chapter 1

shiroandfubuki

Follow the Nightingale: Chapter 1

Feb 17, 2008 23:56

Title: Follow the Nightingale ( Read more... )

follow the nightingale, fanfiction, phoenix wright

Comments 20

feenietime March 13 2008, 08:26:34 UTC

I agree with the other comments: your writing style is superb! I've yet to finish AJ, so I was a bit iffy about reading this, but I'm glad I did. I can't wait to see where this goes. ^^

Also, tiny grammatical error: contrary to a reflection should do... I think you're missing a 'what' in there, in case you want to fix it. ♥

shiroandfubuki March 14 2008, 01:57:28 UTC

Thank you! ^_^

Hmmm... Thanks for pointing out the missing word. I totally didn't mean to. :P

anonymous March 13 2008, 22:28:31 UTC

Wow...I've never really seen someone take this type of approach to a fic before. Very good! Tres bien! It makes the fans of Edgeworth and Narumitsu happy! (I know since I'm a crazy fangirl of the mighty Edgeworth himself, but love the Narumitsu couple anyways) And plus, it seems very in depth in its way of handling the psychology of what's going on in the fic! I look forward to seeing more of your work! ^_^

foxicle March 13 2008, 22:28:35 UTC

shiroandfubuki March 14 2008, 01:58:56 UTC

Thank you! Glad you liked it so much. ^_^

mercilouslia March 16 2008, 21:51:48 UTC

Hooooollly crap. That was..just amazing. Seriously.

I can't wait for the next part to come out! xDD I'm so excited!

shiroandfubuki March 16 2008, 22:56:44 UTC

Thank you! ^_^

blue_zoo May 1 2008, 01:02:07 UTC

Oh goodness...

I adore this! It was a beautiful and innovative approach to fanfiction! Your high diction is inspiring, and your author's address to the reader was phenomenally well done!

ARRRGH. I LOVE THIS FIC.

Please do more, so that I won't cry.

shiroandfubuki May 1 2008, 05:51:51 UTC

Alright. I'll update soon, but just so that you don't cry. :P