Fic: Viewfinder

Oct 01, 2011 01:18

Title: Planning
Author: Me
Word count: 1 602
Pairing: Asami & Akihito
Rating: Light R.
Disclaimer: Characters not mine, plot is.

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classic380 October 1 2011, 01:59:17 UTC
I'm hooked...great story!!! :D

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shirosaki173 October 2 2011, 17:20:07 UTC
Awww, thanks! \o/

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yukishu4ever October 1 2011, 02:19:32 UTC
Waaaaaaaa, it was great!!!!

Please tell me you are going to continue. Our Asami is very clever and I want to see how he is going to react when he realizes what Akihito is planning =D

I really enjoyed this first chapter!!!

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shirosaki173 October 2 2011, 17:20:54 UTC
I'm planning on continuing, yes. Asami is smart, so I wanted Akihito to be smart in his own way too >:) Thanks for reading!

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radcat38 October 1 2011, 02:27:59 UTC
Interesting..would like to see where you go with this. Bet Asami knows or figures out what our little Aki is up to...lol...

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shirosaki173 October 2 2011, 17:21:47 UTC
Ahaha, we'll see where this goes... these two just get together so well, don't they? Thanks for the review!

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george_1990 October 1 2011, 03:33:11 UTC
akihito is kind of sweet in his naivete when he thinks he can escape asami

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shirosaki173 October 2 2011, 17:22:34 UTC
I know, he's always trying to escape but he never does, doesn't he? Then again, I'm pretty sure he doesn't want to ;) thanks for reading!

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rafa_angel October 1 2011, 04:09:38 UTC
Love it. are you going to continue it??? I would love to see from Asami's POV.
thank uuu :)

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shirosaki173 October 2 2011, 17:23:52 UTC
I'm continuing... in fact, I have written a version in Asami's POV, but I've decided to do this whole part in Akihito's POV before I begin posting Asami's side of the story >:) I'm glad you liked it. Thanks!

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