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Dec 10, 2010 01:24


Title: Casting Lots
Author: The one and only me.
Rating: I'm not really clear on the rating thing. But this is definitely a G.
Characters: Reborn, Luce, Yamamoto, Tsuna, Gokudera, Chrome, Ryohei, Hibari (in the background)
Warnings: Tsuna's hysterical-ness and Yamamoto.. being Yamamoto. Oh, spoilers for Future Arc.
Summary: Someone visits the future ( Read more... )

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manriicabaeju December 9 2010, 17:49:25 UTC
...I love this. *w*
Everyone feels so in character and. Yes.
It's wonderful. I love your Yamamoto, too.

All the talk of Uni made me sad though, guh.

Just...
“And someone else I’m really grateful to,” Luce added, almost dreamily, “is that man, Gamma. Both Aria and Luce loved him. And he was faithful to the Giglio Nero family…”
Here.
I think you meant to say "Both Aria and Uni loved him." ?

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shirosaki173 December 10 2010, 01:20:42 UTC
Ah, oops. Thanks for pointing it out! I don't use a beta, so I tend to make little mistakes like this. Thanks for pointing it out!

Haha, Yamamoto's one of my favourite characters. And I've never actually seen Luce even talk -(never watched the anime) but she looks so sweet and kind that I just fell in love with her. And Uni. And Aria XD

ohgoshimranting.

Thanks for reviewing!

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manriicabaeju December 10 2010, 05:51:27 UTC
You're welcome. <3 Looool I don't either. It's alright. :'D

I loooove him. I always feel like I do a horrible job at writing him, though. xD
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I love all of them. And your Luce seemed spot on to me.

nononoit'sokay. <3

of courseeee.

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demoerin December 9 2010, 18:44:06 UTC
Reborn picking on Tsuna is always entertaining. I love the slapstick in this, and at the end, the hints at why Reborn can rely on Yamamoto and likes him so much. It was also nice to get some insight on Luce, Tsuna, and Uni. All in all, this fic is really sweet and fun.

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shirosaki173 December 10 2010, 01:26:13 UTC
When I first read the manga, I laughed aloud almost every chapter when Reborn bullied Tsuna. It was just so epic. I miss the old days of humour although I do also like the more serious turn the story has taken. But seriously. When was the last time Tsuna got shot with a dying will bullet? :(

We rarely see anything about Luce and Uni, so I wanted to write a fic that centered on them. I was just planning to write about Luce, but she and Uni (and Aria) go hand in hand, so it was kinda impossible to avoid.

Thanks for reviewing!

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chaernotwasted December 9 2010, 20:54:41 UTC
This was really cute~ I especially like the coda section with Reborn and Yamamoto!

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shirosaki173 December 10 2010, 01:30:13 UTC
I know it's biased, but Yamamoto is like. My favourite character of all. And I also loved the way they interact together in the manga- Reborn and Yamamoto get along really well (even better than Gokudera and Yamamoto, in terms of interaction).

I also read somewhere that whenever Yamamoto's around, Reborn automatically hops onto his shoulder. And Yamamoto doesn't even bat an eyelid.

Now, if only Reborn was an adult... xD

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chaernotwasted December 10 2010, 13:02:37 UTC
No worries I'm completely biased too. Reborn's my number one and Yamamoto's my number two~ Their manga interaction is some of the best stuff ever.

And the shoulder thing is totally true, there's even some awkward comments and panels in some of the more recent chapters when Reborn has to sit on Ryohei's shoulder instead of Takeshi's.

Mmmmmph. I want adult Reborn sooo sooo bad. ;A; I'm hoping after this arc there will be an Acro arc. Reborn told Yamamoto something waaaaayyy back when they were training together before the...first(?) attack on the Mellone base, I'm pretty sure. Because it was before Squalo brought the fish and K.O. Takeshi. SO Yamamoto knows a secret. *sobs* AND AMANO JUST KEEPS GOING WITH THIS SHIMON STUFF....But I digress.

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shirosaki173 December 10 2010, 13:23:49 UTC
Reborn sat on Yama's shoulder so many times, it struck me immediately when he perched on Ryohei. It didn't look natural. I wonder if he misses Takeshi xD

When Yamamoto got nailed by that Kaoru guy I went :O OMG drama! But then he lands in the hospital and hasn't twitched so much as a finger in all the recent chapters :( except when Byakuran appeared at his bedside. Every time a new chapter comes out I'm like C'MON LADY WHAT WAS BYAKURAN DOING THERE???

And there's one thing I'm curious about... Yamamoto wrote the word 'deritoto' (delitto) on the floor as a clue. But Reborn only told the other family member's about the 'sin' thing after Yamamoto was hospitalized. How did Yamamoto know? O.O If you know an explanation for that I'd love to hear it.

(I'm digressing too. OMG.)

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waterbaby12us December 9 2010, 23:05:54 UTC
I thought it was really sweet ^^

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shirosaki173 December 10 2010, 01:31:06 UTC
Haha, thanks! I was wondering whether everyone was in-character since I kinda wrote this in a rush... so knowing it worked out well is awesome. Thanks for reading!

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marikit December 14 2010, 13:40:05 UTC
XD this was funny, sweet and totallym made my day thanks

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shirosaki173 December 14 2010, 14:22:33 UTC
Haha, getting a review always makes my day too :) Thanks for reading!

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marikit December 14 2010, 22:38:38 UTC
^___^ kindly head over to mine and read my fics?

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shirosaki173 December 15 2010, 11:50:35 UTC
Sure can do! I'm busy right now (I'm writing another fic) so I can't do it right away, but as soon as I have time I'll drop by your journal!

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