~Fic: Time after Time {Umeda/Akiha}

[shitan]

"Sometimes you picture me.. I'm walking too far ahead
You're calling to me, I can't hear what you've said
Then you say go slow, I fall behind
The second hand unwinds"

Comments

[sleepingfingers]

This was simply wonderful.

[jyuufish]

Thank you.. I am happy to have written it as well. I'm always intriqued by the dynamic or the whole "don't let Akiha know I'm here" to Mizuki and I think that something is underneath the surface.. I always get that feeling with Umeda.

[shuufish]

Oh! How beautiful! Really it is, I'm glad we got to see how the hole thing happened from Umeda's point of view.

[shitan]

Yes, it came to me.. and I think that Umeda is WAY better now. It was like that fic normalized him and stabilized him, it was one of those things where I was happy to have written it because I didn't have an angry and bitter Umeda anymore. YAY!

[shuufish]

Which fic? This one or the one that I wrote?

[jyuufish]

Both in essence.. he calmed down quite a bit I noticed when he read that fic.

[denglongfist]

As always, I love your writing style. XD

[jyuufish]

Thank you! *hugs*

[denglongfist]

You're welcome *hugs for you too*