Comments | shivicus: the test part 2

shivicus

the test part 2

Sep 17, 2006 13:09

As the light dimmed, the voice grew louder; the voice made few of the Azrians tremble, and the ground which they stood shake. Some fell over, and some became dizzy, Shiv included ( Read more... )

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Comenting anonymous September 17 2006, 20:13:56 UTC

dude thats like soooooooooooo cool but i think u need o put some girls in there... but thats just me
keep up the good work

MILKSHAKEE!!! anonymous September 17 2006, 20:41:12 UTC

woot woot...go Shiv...and his..noticing things..but I dont get why the crash didnt come out to attack Shiv when he was alone...but OK! I still like it mucho Mikey. And to think...the real battle hasn't even started yet...

:D
CORi

NOOOOOOOOOO! anonymous September 19 2006, 05:06:38 UTC

Yeah Ill say they need some help cause Ive been commenting and yet now dying. Not cool man. Lol jk its your story