i should be over all the butterflies sehun/lu han; pg13; ~5800w the a-z of their story. pretty much just brainless fluff tbh. inspired by david levithan’s the lover’s dictionary.
i both loved and hated the change in POVs. i disliked it only during the times when it was revealed whose point of view it was partway through the paragraph, because then i'll feel this need to re-read the paragraph with the person in mind now that i knew who was thinking it and who they were thinking about. not that re-reading is a bad thing but i felt upset that i was ruining the reading flow for myself :( but i also loved it because it's like, does it really matter whose point of view it is if, when it comes down to it, the underlying emotions of both of them are the same - that they love each other.
i think my favs were caesura, enviable, kamikaze and meld :3 and right around the 'j's i was thinking, hmm maybe there'll be a wedding, n. but no :( LOL
also, thank you for getting that song stuck in my head now ._.
hello!! the shifting POVs was something new i wanted to try (alongside the second person pov) hence it was pretty experimental & rough i guess and yea i agree it could definitely have been done better n___u thank you for reading though!
this is so beautiful ;;^;; i love ittt >.< thank you so much for writting it :** ahh btw can you allow me to translate this one into Vietnamese? cuz i think Vietnamese SeLu shipper (like me~) gonna love it a lot ^^ i'll keep the credit, and link back to your original (if you want me to) thank you again~~
hello! i'm really glad you enjoyed it so much ^^ and with regard to the translation: of course you may! but can i just request that you post the link of the translation here after you're done, or you can pm me if you wish to instead (: thank you so much for reading ♥️♥️
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i think my favs were caesura, enviable, kamikaze and meld :3 and right around the 'j's i was thinking, hmm maybe there'll be a wedding, n. but no :( LOL
also, thank you for getting that song stuck in my head now ._.
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ahh thank you for reading & liking! ♥
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i love every bit of this :')
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ahh btw can you allow me to translate this one into Vietnamese? cuz i think Vietnamese SeLu shipper (like me~) gonna love it a lot ^^ i'll keep the credit, and link back to your original (if you want me to)
thank you again~~
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and with regard to the translation: of course you may! but can i just request that you post the link of the translation here after you're done, or you can pm me if you wish to instead (:
thank you so much for reading ♥️♥️
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