Comments | shiyori: Puttin' on the Ritz

ninjamoose26 in shiyori

Puttin' on the Ritz

Oct 25, 2009 23:31

Another ShiYori fanfic, this time it is going to be multichapter. Rated T.

A kiss was probably the worst way to end their dance in the spotlight.
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5467725/1/Puttin_on_the_Ritz

And this picture goes with it too. ^_^ Leave a comment

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anonymous December 29 2010, 04:18:33 UTC

I like this FanFic, although it is a little straight forward. I think that if the the Fic would of been based in a point of the real anime, lets say after the incedent at the fake karakura town. Like after Hiyori's injurys healed then it would of made more sense, if you were to tie it back to the anime.But sense this is not my FanFic and im to lazy to write one my self at the moment. I should't be makeing such critical statements. All and all one of the best FanFics i have read