floating petals (3/3)

[shizukanai]

title floating petals
pairing yunho/jaejoong
genre au,historical,romance
rating nc-17
summary Jaejoong is willing to sacrifice many things for the sake of his family, even himself when the governor asks him for his hand in marriage. But despite feeling comfortable around the man more than twice his age, it's rather the man's elusive son Yunho who

Comments

[harunotenshi]

a wonderful ending.

i had really thought that jaejoong was to marry the governor even with his feelings for yunho... i was so glad that the governor had planned well and really... both yunho and jaejoong are just for each other... and i was doubly happy too that the governor understood changmin's feelings for junsu and had accepted them :)

[shizukanai]

Quite a few initially hated the governor haha but he is a really good man with good plans. Thanks for reading ^^

[theladysilver]

Oh my gosh! Yoolie! This fic is so lovely! I've been waiting for you to finish this before reading. I read all 3 parts today in one sitting and I have enjoyed reading it. I can see how much you've improved, yet again

[shizukanai]

Aww thank you so much :') I wann keep improving like this.

Right? If one looked closely, it got pretty obvious what the governor's intentions were but I tried hard to keep the hints at bay. I'm glad I could keep at least some suspense going until the very end.

I was a little unsure of the smut because I have not written any in a long time and it's for a historical fic so that doubled the pressure. But I'm glad it's being received so well by my readers. :')

[theladysilver]

You're welcome bb!! XD Just keep on doing what you're doing and you'll continually improve, like you always do!

Mostly, you have to read between the lines. But if you get too caught up with the idea that it was the governor who asked for Jaejoong's hand, you might end up missing out on all the hints. It's so easy to get caught up with Yunho's and Jaejoong's feelings that one might miss out all the hints. Which in my opinion, shows how well thought out and written this fic is. I can slowly see the direction of your writing style is going, and I must say, it's a good one.

You did a good job on the smut Yoolie! I hope you can write more YunJae, or at least update on your other stories! Hope to see more updates from you soon BB! Again, good job on this one!

[snow_meow]

thank you for completing the story.

I love this last chapter.
I love the way you wrote the plot.

I am so glad that Jaejoong was chosen because for Yunho.
Yunho's father really loves his children that he will do anything for their happiness.

[shizukanai]

Thank you so much for reading this story and sticking to it till the very end although I needed a while to finish it.
Yes the governor's love for his children is so sincere and great. :')

[miszc]

So amazing. The revealation by Master Jung is most surprising.
And i really really love the quote on floating petals! So inspiring :)

[shizukanai]

Thank you so much for your kind words and of course for reading this story :)

[db5k]

YES SO IT WASN'T THE GOVERNOR. YAY when i was reading the previous parts i was reaaally hoping that they all just knew the wrong info about who the groom will be. turns out, it was all a part of the plan of yunho's father! haha i am so happy for yunjae ❤💕 oh and minsu as well! they will have a happy ending too~ hihi
yun and jae were so sweet and fluffy especially after confirming each other's feelings, i just o<-< oh oh!! and i love it when yunho calls jae, "love" 😭❤❤ the father is dying though....? ;A; aww. but at least he knows his family is happy :'D

[shizukanai]

Yes both YunJae and MinSu will have their well-deserved happy ending :') Haha since I made them rather angsty in the first parts, I had to hit you all with some fluff after their confessions to each other. My heart goes all out for Yunho calling Jae like that so I love to use it in my fics :')

Yeah the governor is dying, so he did everything to know his children in safe hands :')